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schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh I will be waiting for Lucius.
It looks like Hermione has some more demons of her own to work through. I hope she can get past the pain at Hogwarts. I can't wait till the plan is reveled to Hermione.
person aliciana
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thought nothing could be sexier than when the Potions Master became the Headmaster but I was wrong. Lucius taking up that position is just awesome. I mean he is one hot dude. Do I sound American enough? I'm actually a Scottish adopted Mancunian.....I can sound like a young Minerva on a good day. I adore your intelligent banter between Hermione and Lucius and his demeanour reminds me very much of Jilly Cooper's roguish Rupert Campbell-Black. You know you should hate his arrogance but he is all the more devilishly appealing and sexier for it. So let's revel in his arrogance and allow ourselves to be seduced by his power as Hermione appears to be going more and more under his delightful spell.I'm afraid he'd have had me at "I do" and my arse would have been turned straight in his direction for a good skelping well before the icing had hardened on the wedding cake! Wonderful stuff. Keep it coming. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know you say that Hermione and Lucius would move faster if he kept the sheets warm 24/7, but I am not so sure I completely agree. They are both such cerebral creatures, that their biggest erogenous zone is the mind. I think Lucius will only win Hermione if he seduces her brain, which with her snippy nature, is probably not that easy. LOL

Anyhoo, I loved this chapter.

I have to laugh at how Hermione has changed her mind about dressing up for dinner, now that she has been chastised by him? This must totally confound her. Is she starting to fret about what he thinks? Of course, I think this is why she is so snippy with him. He has exerted a bit of dominance over her and she really doesn
person dragon37
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. One of your best, waiting impaitently for the next chapter. For some reason I can't get your site to see the pics of Lucius. Lucky for me I have a vivid imagination. Keep up the excellent work.
person Citten
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well i enjoyed the chapter very much and the last couple of chapters even more--okay much more! :) well i am very much looking forward to what else is in the plan. i think in the long run lucius is going to love having hermione's brilliant mind helping him this time in the buisness problem is going to be enjoyable. well i think this stint at hogwarts is going to be very good for both of them on many levels and i loving how hermione is slowly--almost too slowly--oh well with you all in good time! :) well do try and post sooner rather than later!!!
person rini868
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, Ron always seems to be either too big or too small... sigh nothing ever goes right for him *tee hee*

I'm looking around my desk now... my desk is big enough for a life sized paper weight but there might not be any room left for me to do my assignments...

Oooh! Yay! Plan!

Aww! He designed her clothes. That's kind of cute :)

"Maybe there was a Retired Death Eater Veterans Club with a secret handshake and passwords." Oh I sincerely hope so :D

:( You told us a lot without really telling us anything at all...

I'm scared for Hermione and what will happen to her if she goes back to Hogwarts.
person Linstock
schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been so looking forward to this . Great story. Sorry about not commenting recently. It is not lack of love it is lack of internet..and i was still recovering for the last lemony chapter.
schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Fourteen: One merely has to be perceptive enough to understand that if one was once a murderous blood-purist and one
schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I sort of like the worried!Lucius. It tends to soften what could be an overly harsh persona. I also got a bit of a giggle imagining Hermione doing her best to order a hideous wardrobe just to irk Lucius. I think he kind of deserved it. :D But the gradual chipping away of their armors is good to see as well. I can absolutely believe Hermione opposing discrimination in any form. It's still a little muddy on what her marriage to him has to do with it, but I'm sure that will be revealed at some point. Looking forward to finding out soon!
person jw
schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 14 - that wasn't such a bad secret. I think she will enjoy a good mystery, esp if the damage also applies to non-Slytherin Purebloods such as the Weasleys. I don't think the goblins are involved -- money is money to them, so I think it's wizards and witches behind the plot. It's definitely time for her to face Hogwarts again; her own children will go there one day, and it had good memories for her too. Why can't she ask Lucius to redecorate The Room for her? He must have bad memories of many rooms from the war. Thanks for the new chapter! I'm so glad they're starting to work together.