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I'm going with loin cloth. He's Adam; I'm Eve. Time to practice populating the world! lol Thanks, hon! HG4eva

lol I love it! They both are missing so much because they are so set in their ways! Awesome!!! I wonder just hoe much fire whiskey is going to be needed for dinner. And perhaps for the explosive argument after Mr. And Mrs. Snape leave. Some one should just thump them both on the head and make them talk to each other lol...Just teasing.


Lady Serin

ch 16 - poor Lucius, slammed and rejected at every turn. I suppose I can understand how his fragile ego cannot take her reaction after he tells her the Hogwarts Board thinks he is pedophile, but he does need to tell her soon. I think Cissa and Severus will pick up on lots of Hermione's feelings, but not sure she will listen to their counsel, if any. Thanks for the new chapter!

Chapter Sixteen: I didn

It's been a while since I've dropped a review, but I've been reading along nonetheless. I love your story so far, and I'm already wrapped up in the plot. What kind of trouble are the two going to get up to once they reach Hogwarts? Is it going to be a very detailed stay at the old Alma Mater? Are Snape and Cissa still going to be a big part of the plot when they go to the school? Would Batman kick Superman's ass in a fist fight? These are all questions that only YOU can answer. ^w^

I'm just crumbling your biscuits, there. I'm glad of the update, and even gladder (word? Not a word? No red line....doesn't mean it's a GOOD word...) that there was some smut involved. Hermione surely is an uptight little thing, isn't she? But I think she's coming around. Around his bedroom, around her bedroom, and probably some random room in the house later on. :3 I look forward to the next installment of lovely lovely awkwardness.

~DragonFyre

I wish Hermione would stop trying to conform to pureblood ways and just be herself. Wear a muggle dress to dinner if she wants to, have the elves prepare a middle class muggle dinner. Invite two of her friends over. Organize some charades for afterwards with words like death eater and inbred. Better yet, invite some muggles over. Poison Snape's food for his part in this fiasco. At least some U-No-Poo. Aside from not asking Hermione about the dinner invitation, Lucius has invited over two people who Hermione has a very bad history with. Severus with his constant unfair and ill treatment of her and Narcissa for her role in Hermione's torture. I know a lot of people are ragging on Hermione's attitude, but she was forced into this marriage and Lucius is a bigoted death eater. She is a victim in this. I see that he is making attempts and they are misunderstanding each other, but with all the steps she is taking to conform to his culture, why can't he do the same?

I loved this chapter. The lemons were fantastic, but I must say the details that came out about their relationship were even better. I thought there seemed to be some sadness in this chapter. They are both questioning themselves, even if they don't realize it. For a very socially adept man, Lucius was not so smart with his invitation for the Snapes to come to dinner lol. Amazing that two such perceptive people who can see the motivations of others are so blind when it comes to each other. I am really enjoying how you are spinning out this getting to know each other...the sex just opens up the door for more communication for them because they are unable to erect their barriers at that time. It will be very interesting to see how the dinner party plays out....I would love to have Lucius now that I am back from vacation, I can truly appreciate him now that I am rested....Lucius in costume....hmmmm, I think I like the school teacher version as any other ideas may be too Muggle for the poor man

You know, once Hermione gets past her puritanical ideas about sex, she's going to be insatiable. Well even moreso. I'm surprised she hasn't started researching. "come and lick us?" Hee. I'm starting to feel really sorry for Lucius, because he is actually starting to be engaged by the vicious little witch. But I don't think he realizes how he makes her feel, either. Lovely lemons, by the way.

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