rate_review Reviews

Sorry for the rant.
I just finished the story till now in one go and feel more with Hermione than Lucious.
Ups. Freud

Woohoo! Thank you for the lovely lemon pie. That was like two slices instead of just one.
I

Two words, hon, BLACK LEATHER! Great job.
J.

I will love to see him as EL ZORRO, cape and mask only... as for the sword.. HEHEHEHE!!!!!!! You figure it out.. LOL

Well sweetie. At first I thought it was easy (and predictable!). Dress him in the Potions Master's garb but then I thought no......how about a British Naval Commander's uniform complete with reasonably short haircut.....Oh Christ....I'm getting visions of Daniel Craig/Jason Isaacs a la James Bond. Right enough of that. Down to business. That was one hot chapter but I am thinking that even though Hermione is still very assertive and sarcastic she should still fight her corner a little more. I'm hopeful that they will both learn the often lost arts of communication and compromise as they also have to learn to make the most of what Fate and the gorgeously devious Snape has dealt them, wonderful bastard that he is. As for stringing up some of the teachers at my old school, yes I hear what you say. Fortunately, I was 18, a very strong personality and was in a very loving, confident relationship with my older boyfriend, now husband and was more than able to deal with the attention. I mean some of these guys were only about 25 and drop-dead gorgeous. And I also appreciate that in the main these relationships can be both very damaging and dangerous especially when coercion/ blackmail/force is applied. So don't do it!!!!! Just do as I say and not as I did! In my day it just seemed more innocent and made school a more exciting place. Think St Trinian's! These guys never even taught me my subjects. I had all the old, skanky ones for that! I love this story. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.

Oooh! Next chap Sev and Cissa? Awesome!

Yes, sleep is overrated...who needs sleep anyway?

Skinning a ladybug? I'd assume acid would work quite well, but maybe a little too well...

"Come and lick us" Oh I like that :D

Oooh! That's not good, you don't not answer the master of the manor :S

If he has a helthy sized ego now, how big was it before he married Hermione? I shudder at the thought...

Now they're both feeling like failures? These two need some help.

I just want them to give each other a hug :)

I think Lucius should dress up as Batman :D Batman is awesome!

I'm liking the story so far! It's nice when fics keep Lucius the dastardly, insensitive plotter that he is, instead of turning him into a. a monster or b. a fluffy romantic reformee. So nice job. :)

I enjoy the dynamic between him and Hermione, also. It's very realistic.

And to answer your question... I think a professor's outfit. (magical professor, NOT muggle.) Just like some teaching robes or something. And act out a scene w/ Hermione as the student. ;)

Oh it would have to be something Zoro-esque....black trousers, red sash at his waist, no shirt...black mask.....mmmmm, delicious....though I can also see him in a fur loincloth, fur boots to his knees.....gold bands around his biceps and a horned helmet...maybe wearing nothing but a pair of tall black boots with several silver buckles all along the sides....my god I could go on and on and on treating him like my own personal Barbie doll. =)

Love it! I'm just wondering how Hermione is going to handle the Snapes when they get to dinner. Lucius certainly surprised her there!
Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

I like this story and appreciate all the work you're putting into it. You're an awesome writer! Your stories are treasures! There's a little bit of a "but" coming up. I know and trust that you have a plan for the story. Our couple will have a happy ending. But... I'm having a hard time with the way Lucius is treating Hermione and the circumstances of their marriage. Sure, she enjoys the sex once they get started, but she is still a reluctant partner. She does not want this at the moment. If she had a courtship period, she probably would. It's almost like any future feelings on her end will be partially due to her being brainwashed by sex. Amazing sex-- you're a goddess with your descriptions! I know that they will have a tumultous but wonderful journey. And! We will all be very happy with the whole story once the relationship all works out! I hope I didn't upset you! Just needed to get that bit out! Can't wait for more!!