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Hermione seems very...petty in this fic. Nothing at all like I imagine her to be, or how you wrote her before. It makes it really hard to like her. Was this your intent?

Chapter 17:

I can completely understand Hermione

Love it! Poor Lucius was disappointed that Hermione didn't wear the jewelry he had gotten her. But she didn't tell him that she was jealous of Narcissa. Looking forward to see what happens in the next chapter!

Excellent chapter, LaBib! You really are a master writer. You

Lovely chapter, I was giggling while reading it. I look forward to more
If i could randomly dress Snape in anything I would have to say a Toga, jungle boy attire or something as amusing and not commonly used.

First, MERLIN, these two need to talk, shout, scream, whatever it takes to get out some true feelings to each other. Seriously, they are completely missing the boat on this one! Sad. If just one of them slipped... sigh, they have such a long, LONG way to go. lol I loved the addition of Severus and Narcissa. They are the perfect opposites of Hermione and Lucius. Great!!

And, Severus...hmmm... I think he should let his freak flag fly and go caveman! I see his legs as a bit spindly, but I think the corded upper body would more than make up for it. :-)

Thanks! HG4eva

I guess hugs are only slightly better than lemons so I'll live... for now :)

Well the marriage was Severus' idea in the first place, so he really shouldn't complain about being dropped into the Malfoy's marital problems :P

I know how Hermione feels... sigh...

Awww! Eastern spice isn't THAT bad.

Oooooh! I like pretty stationary. Pretty stationary is awesome! And if it's pretty and green, that's even better :)

Lucius in Regency apparel? I didn't even think of that! *Eyes beginning to glaze over* Mmm! Lucius in a cravat.

I think Snape would look awesome in Regency apparel too.

How about Snape in black leather? Snape, the head of a notorious motorcycle gang :D Oh but it would be funny to see Snape as a sarcastic and grumpy angel :)

Another brilliant chapter and the banter between "the old married couple" i.e. Severus and Lucius was just magical. Good to see Hermione retaliate against her table education but presumably it did not deteriorate so much as to be too embarrassing......I mean that would give us Muggles/Muggle-borns a really bad name! I think your portayal of Narcissa is absolutely spot on and that possibly she and Severus had some previous history before she was married. As she is quite opposite to Hermione in her calm demeanour, I suspect Narcissa was probably too compliant for Lucius. Hermione is a spitfire and it would appear Lucius is relishing the challenge. Though time may show that her youth and inexperience and even over-exuberance for pet projects may exhaust and wear him out. Never in the bedroom though that would be sacrilege. Oh and the good Professor....the best thing he could wear would be my bedsheets. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.

ch 17 - looks like the dinner was more pleasant than Hermione expected, although I wonder if Severus would help Lucius by bringing up the diamonds and the Diagon Alley store they came from yesterday. Lucius is really thick, to correct Hermione's manners in front of company -- and not just any company, but his ex-wife and Hermione's former Potions mater. He better stop correcting her when Draco shows up! Thanks for the new chapter. And I'd like to see Snapey in black leather, something like Rickman's outfit as Nottingham in Robin Hood.

Chapter Seventeen: I suppose I