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October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, when are you sending Lucius to me for a night of bathing fun? I love how with every argument, they have an interlude that creeps them the tiniest bit forward to a peaceful detente. I know it is going to be a long time yet and there are going to be many more misunderstandings, but every millimeter is progress. So tell me....when we going to have some hot sex in the gardens?
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October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch 19: Have to agree with Hermione on the bath salts issue. Hate when they don't dissolve. :(
Poor baby has boo-boos. Let me kiss them better?
Yes, yes, must make amends to make the whoopee, Lucius. And ditto to Hermione.
I find that view quite mesmerizing as well, at least the mental image of Lucius naked, in a tub, ((I digress.))
Quiescent is such a wonderful word, isn't it? One of my favorites!
Living with an edgy Lucius like dancing on the lip of a live volcano -- beautiful description!
Yes, yes, a problem for another day.
My fingers are lonely now. They need a back.
Ah, Hermione has found one of my secret guilty pleasures -- watching a man as he indulges solely in pleasure then lending aid at the most opportune moment. Delicious, dear. Very enthralling and enticing, and just where did my husband go? Get back here, man!
I bit surprised he didn't drift off in the tub.
:D
Poor baby has boo-boos. Let me kiss them better?
Yes, yes, must make amends to make the whoopee, Lucius. And ditto to Hermione.
I find that view quite mesmerizing as well, at least the mental image of Lucius naked, in a tub, ((I digress.))
Quiescent is such a wonderful word, isn't it? One of my favorites!
Living with an edgy Lucius like dancing on the lip of a live volcano -- beautiful description!
Yes, yes, a problem for another day.
My fingers are lonely now. They need a back.
Ah, Hermione has found one of my secret guilty pleasures -- watching a man as he indulges solely in pleasure then lending aid at the most opportune moment. Delicious, dear. Very enthralling and enticing, and just where did my husband go? Get back here, man!
I bit surprised he didn't drift off in the tub.
:D
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October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh. Very sexy. I wish I could take a bath with Lucius. I wouldn't have started with his back. His front would have been my first target.
Not like batman? Ah! But his muscular physique! His dark, sexy voice! His alter ego!
On a random note, which superhero/villain do you think Lucius would be most like? What about Hermione?
Now, I'm very happy with this chapter. Now...A question: Will little baby Malfoys play a large part in this story, or will they pop in at the end? Is there going to be an acceptance process with Lucius for his half-blood offspring? Loved it! Keep up the good work!
Not like batman? Ah! But his muscular physique! His dark, sexy voice! His alter ego!
On a random note, which superhero/villain do you think Lucius would be most like? What about Hermione?
Now, I'm very happy with this chapter. Now...A question: Will little baby Malfoys play a large part in this story, or will they pop in at the end? Is there going to be an acceptance process with Lucius for his half-blood offspring? Loved it! Keep up the good work!
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October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So it's official. Sev is from Burnley in Lancashire about six miles from me. It's a true cotton mill town with a very up and coming football(soccer for my American cousins)team. You've told me this as his tipple of choice is Benedictine and most of this liquer is drunk here than anywhere else in the world. It was brought back from France by servicemen in WW1 and they still love it. Burnley is also the bithplace of that other great wizard Gandalf. No not Tolkien but Sir Ian McKellen. Here endeth the first lesson. What an intriguing chapter. What with Cissy confirming her sexual predilections as a sumbissive to both men and Hermione still having the jury out a bit on hers. Your portrayal of all the characters is absolutely spot on with Severus still his own man yet opting for a calmer life and Lucius still attempting to exert as much control as possible over his young fiery wife. The language you use is so realistic and the prose so well written the chapters just flow and are so easy to read. Oh Hell! I've gone off on one of my "appreciation" rants a la Open University literature essays. I do try to be funny and witty in my reviews but sometimes it just comes out all sucky-upty. I'm getting a new air/spa bath soon could you send Lucius and/or Sev to come and test it with me? Please? Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.
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October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello there, I'm one of the lurkers here. I've always wanted to review, but have always been at a loss as how to properly express how wonderful I think this story is. It makes me laugh and smile, and I just love the way you've portrayed everyone. You're an excellent writer, very talented. I can't wait to see how the rest of this unfolds. =D
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October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
She's just reacting. But he gives her a lot to react to. I liked your Narcissa. Although, her reaction to Snape is adorable, and fun especially the way Hermione reacted to it. I hope Hermione and Lucius start to find some common ground.
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October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, very nice. I quite enjoyed the way Lucius and Severus interacted. They're both quite alluring in their own way, aren't they? Lucius is a Blonde Adonis, sculpted and smooth. Severus is like batman: (You didn't have a crush on him at one point? I know I had the actions figures just cause I thought he was ADORABLE) he's so dark and alluring.
Interesting interactions amongst all of the characters. Poor Lucius and his shins. I could rub/lick them for him if he would be so obliged as to let me. Good show, and I look forward to more lemons. Maybe Hermione has begun to see our dear Lucifer- Oop! I mean Lucius- in a new light. *Hopeful evil grin*
Interesting interactions amongst all of the characters. Poor Lucius and his shins. I could rub/lick them for him if he would be so obliged as to let me. Good show, and I look forward to more lemons. Maybe Hermione has begun to see our dear Lucifer- Oop! I mean Lucius- in a new light. *Hopeful evil grin*
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October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is sad i just realised that i am one of your lurkers! usually i am much better than this1 :) i am loving how things are going espically with her learning so many things in this chapter! i am really loving narcissa's help rather intentally or not. ;) but i could just stab hermione for what she did to lucius by just simiply not wearing the jewels. well i do love that she got what was coming for not wearing them so now i do hope that some things will start going even more forward! ? :) so the reason you just stopped it there was to get us to review, right? and not to drive us crazy, right? :) catch you next chapter! :)
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October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hermione is so intimidated by Cissy. She is jealous of the history she had with Lucius and that connection they will always have due to Draco. Hermione thinks her beauty pales in comparison to Narcissa. Hermione needs to realize yeah they had a history hell they were married for 20+ years and they have a child. The only thing that will ease her insecurites is Lucius. Whether or not he wants to do anything remains to be seen. Overall another excellent chapter.
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October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 18:
What is it about women that makes us gossip in the bathroom? Though I am not so sure I would talk to my current husband's ex-wife about said husbands erotic habits. I get the feeling that Narcissa was again, too much fluff for Lucius, he needed a woman with a backbone with whom he could truly be himself, someone he could let go with and give her everything without worrying that she couldnt take or handle it. I am guessing he is beginning to see that potential with his spitfire of a new bride. Seems like Lucius requires a bit more imagination in his 'playtime' than Sev who just lays it all out there on the table and expects unquestioned compliance. No doubt for 'this' incarnation of Hermione Sev would have been driven to gag her during intercourse. It makes you imagine that as children Lucius was the one wearing a knights garb riding on his pony pretending to rescue a princess (or more than likely dressed as king planning to take over a country), using his imagination to make playtime more enjoyable where Severus sat with his chemistry sets where everything was laid out with precise instructions and expected outcomes.
Though I still can not bring myself to like Narcissa. I just cant! And I hated her 'look' in HBP...looked like an old woman. Did get a bit of a thrill when Sev chastised Bella though =)
Sheldon!! Another lover of geeks! I was joking with a friend that while I would not be on par with his intellect, I AM currently working with a ridiculously large number of comic books that were donated to our museum that has required me to gain an abnormally large amount of knowledge on the subject of comics and superheroes. So, being relatively well educated AND well versed on comics I could be the perfect woman for Sheldon...instead of talking dirty Ill simply talk "DC" and wear Wonder Woman underoos to bed. ;) And he and I share a frustration with creationists that could provide hours of conversation (had a man ask me if I thought dinosaurs were on the ark...I just walked away)...All my friends love Leonard but I think they are wrong...Sheldon is the way to go, they dont buy my theory that tall lanky men tend to be well hung LOL but I stand by it. Plus...and Im dating myself here...I always remember the line from Revenge of the Nerds when Betty asked Lewis "Are all nerds as good as you?" and he replied "Yes...all jocks ever think about are sports....all nerds think about is sex." Sheldon would be a god in the sack because you know he would have done extensive research into just what was going to make his partner experience "The Big Bang". =)
Until next time when you will be subjected to more of my ramblings...
Happy Writing!!!!
S_G
What is it about women that makes us gossip in the bathroom? Though I am not so sure I would talk to my current husband's ex-wife about said husbands erotic habits. I get the feeling that Narcissa was again, too much fluff for Lucius, he needed a woman with a backbone with whom he could truly be himself, someone he could let go with and give her everything without worrying that she couldnt take or handle it. I am guessing he is beginning to see that potential with his spitfire of a new bride. Seems like Lucius requires a bit more imagination in his 'playtime' than Sev who just lays it all out there on the table and expects unquestioned compliance. No doubt for 'this' incarnation of Hermione Sev would have been driven to gag her during intercourse. It makes you imagine that as children Lucius was the one wearing a knights garb riding on his pony pretending to rescue a princess (or more than likely dressed as king planning to take over a country), using his imagination to make playtime more enjoyable where Severus sat with his chemistry sets where everything was laid out with precise instructions and expected outcomes.
Though I still can not bring myself to like Narcissa. I just cant! And I hated her 'look' in HBP...looked like an old woman. Did get a bit of a thrill when Sev chastised Bella though =)
Sheldon!! Another lover of geeks! I was joking with a friend that while I would not be on par with his intellect, I AM currently working with a ridiculously large number of comic books that were donated to our museum that has required me to gain an abnormally large amount of knowledge on the subject of comics and superheroes. So, being relatively well educated AND well versed on comics I could be the perfect woman for Sheldon...instead of talking dirty Ill simply talk "DC" and wear Wonder Woman underoos to bed. ;) And he and I share a frustration with creationists that could provide hours of conversation (had a man ask me if I thought dinosaurs were on the ark...I just walked away)...All my friends love Leonard but I think they are wrong...Sheldon is the way to go, they dont buy my theory that tall lanky men tend to be well hung LOL but I stand by it. Plus...and Im dating myself here...I always remember the line from Revenge of the Nerds when Betty asked Lewis "Are all nerds as good as you?" and he replied "Yes...all jocks ever think about are sports....all nerds think about is sex." Sheldon would be a god in the sack because you know he would have done extensive research into just what was going to make his partner experience "The Big Bang". =)
Until next time when you will be subjected to more of my ramblings...
Happy Writing!!!!
S_G