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Squee, I just love all your details like the bath crystals making the bottom of the tub feel gritty. It

That was hot sexy and wonderful!!!!!! More please!

Love this chapter! My favorite part was Hermione massaging Lucius' back. I guess she didn't expect him to ask her to do that for him! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

This story is really good and I can hardly wait to read more!

First off, I'm honored my thoughts wound up in your story ^_^ arigoto.

I am pleased to see they are opening up to each other and speaking about what they want and feel, even if it is almost like butting heads. I can see those shields dropping just a micro-meter. ^_^. I look forward to seeing more of this happen, perhaps a friendship can be found.

Ahh the love scene in the water was very nice. It takes a lot of trust for that to be allowed, even if Lucius doesn't know he giving it to her. Seeing Hermione open her sexuality a bit is also impressive, I look forward to seeing both areas of their lives grow.

Can't wait for the next chappy,

Lady Serin

Yes...Yes....Yes....Yesssss. A la Meg Ryan in "When Harry met Sally". Never watched the bloody film as I can't stand Ms Ryan.....but you get the gist. Eeeeh lass! Blood pressure steadily rising as one reads that. Oh, I'm so looking forward to my new spa bath now especially as you are sending the boys round with the bubbly. Lovely chapter and good to see that they can be civilised to each other. I mean massaging one's partner is both intimate and caring. Right that's it. Come on husband.....please wear the blond wig. You will suit it.Honest. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.

Chapter Nineteen: Mayonnaise? Your innuendos are so refreshingly fresh, LaBib. Severus and Lucius are the buns and I

I was reading your reply to Snapes_Goddess. I think Helen McCrory is a good actress but I didn't like her as Narcissa (She would have probably made a pretty good Bellatrix though). She looked a lot older than Bellatrix, who's meant to be the oldest. I guess some of it could be explained by stress etc. And the hair was weird...

Talking about feelings, in a shared bath! Yay!

Guh! Bath massage... *imagination takes hold*

I hope Lucius' shins get better :)


Correction:

Chapter 19:

Okay...its getting eerie now...I just finished writing a bathtub scene with Lucius =) Though it turned out vastly different as my Lucius is a major prude while Hermione is not LOL...very enjoyable, even to the discomfort that comes with unmelted bath salts =)...and who wouldnt wanna stroke Lucius's eel in the bath? I have a fixation with washing his hair though, I think it would be an incredibly erotic experience.

Finally I was able to catch up! Ooh I love how you portrayed Narcissa. She is happy for Lucius and his new bride and trying to become friends with Hermione who is jealous of her. The dinner party was a blast to read. Poor Lucius can't seem to win, his poor abused shines. Does he want me to kiss them and make it all better? The bath scene was very steamy. I loved that Hermione finally let go for a minute and took charge. Of course who can resist a wet naked Lucius :) Hopefully soon Hermione will let go in the bedroom and enjoy Lucius style in bed. Her body already likes it, now she need to stop living in denial with her mind. They both need to start bending and compromising in this marriage or it is going to be a very rough ride. Not that I don't mind them clashing with each other. I can't wait for more, and really can't wait for when they relocate to Hogwarts.