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Sorry as you can see I've time on my hands. Should point out that as I have a degree in English Literature it is quite unforgivable that in my last review I spelt "actually" and "marriage" incorrectly. And to think I went to a bloody English grammar school too. Fifty points from Slytherin I think. That's my House. Right....off to bed now. Night night. Wouldn't be able to sleep if I hadn't rectified that...............etc, etc.Zzzzzzzzzzzzz.

As always your imagination astouns me. I can't wait to see how the girls react to Lucius as the Headmaster, I think Hermione will have her hands full. I know, if I was one of the girls, I would have try real hard to get his attention, no matter if he is married.

Wow, looooved! Just more, please???

Wow, you really went all out with this chapter. Excellent character study as well as hints of what they are both thinking. Funny though, they still have not figured it out yet, they are perfect for each other. They are both analytical in different ways and they complement each other. You have done a really wonderful job of showing their progress with each other without rushing it or making it overly fluffy. Lucius does have a human side and Hermione is more than just 'brains' and you really showcase that in a way that is believable. I can't wait for the next helping of smut though!

I loved the complexities of your characters in this story and will enjoy reading more.

Oh, please update this soon! It's so good. And well written! Lucius/Hermione smut is the only HP ship I follow, and I'm so glad to find quality material such as this story!

I just love the kind of love story you're writing, with two apparently ill-assorted lovers who'll... end up falling in (a kind of) love, right? Is that where you are going?

Not being a Snape "fancier", I don't enjoy his involvement in that story as much as I should, I guess, but you're the author, and in my book, what the author says goes.

Please, more smut!

Oooo, LaBib, you always do such a good job of showing the persnickety touchiness of Lucius and Hermione Malfoy. Here Lucius is, setting Hermione free from the manor, hoping that she will stay

excellent, please update soon

As always, excellent interplay. The mystery is intriguing. Thanks for sharing.

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