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Oh. My. God. A brand new spanking chapter! *catches the comment and glares* What do you mean, 'got the word order wrong'? What kind of establishment are you running here?! I ordered spanking, damn it, and unless I see some in the next 20 minutes I'll expect a full refund!

First off, the wine thing: EVERYONE gets the headaches... But it's not the influence that causes them, it's memories of performing under it. The wine influence. Performing under other 'influences' is more likely to cause pregnancy (smart girl, sticking to finance!). Second: May I suggest 'Merlin Monroe' getup instead of the tutu for our dear Potions Master? That's two Wrackspurts with one bone... err... stone - 'peeking included in admission price'. Third and anal... I mean, final... (what the Hell is wrong with me today?!) Oh, forget it... I'll just go read the damned thing, shall I?

"Was that a requirement of Death Eaters?" - Makes one question her allegiance, doesn't it? ^_~

"I haven't really bothered to date since..." - Now WHY would she volunteer this kind of information to Cissa? Lucius talk I can buy as an attempt to pry some 'tips&tricks' out of the lovely Mrs Snape, but this is something she can't possibly think Narcissa is interested in. Babbling again, the poor dear...

"...one of us would be kissing a Dementor after the wedding night." - Another gem. XD

"He had a strong ego, but he was more competitive than Cinderella

More, more, gimme more. Please!!! I can't wait to see what other wicked things will happen. You're definately a Goddess at this. ^__^

This is the first time in one of your stories I don't think they are going to find a way to each other. They honestly don't seem to want to. They find each other sexually attractive, but so much time is being spent on their bitterness and need to change each other. I'm sure you will prove me wrong, but I'm wondering how.

This self-doubt and self-analysis is getting really tedious. I know you're trying to make these characters deep, but now they're just...exhausting. The past chapters center only on everyone's petty vindictiveness. Are these characters ever going to go anywhere?

Chapter Twenty-Three: *arches eyebrows* Really? A camp follower? Please, LaBib, let

WOW!! I expect smut, but that was flaming and we have not even gotten the details yet. I guess your vacation really 'recharged' your batteries LOL...interesting that Hermione has gotten some insight from Narcissa about Lucius and his thought processes and while it brings her some jealousy, I think in the long run, it will help her out. Once again, another wonderful chapter and I am sooo envious of your talent.

Ow, ow, ow, phew, damn, blowing on my fingers -- they're burnt!

Hmmm... Hermione is very hard on herself. I thought that her question about how Narcissa would feel if Severus flirted with the waitress was legitimate. Narcissa was questioning Hermione's right to feel jealous. (and you feel the way you feel, no one can tell you how to feel) I know she was being nice, but... it was still accomplishing the same thing. And... I think Lucius is asking a bit much of Hermione by expecting her to feel comfortable socializing with his gorgeous ex-wife and her ex-professor- especially considering the fact she barely knows Lucius himself. Honestly, that's one of the most awkward social situations he could put her through and he's dense enough to do it while trying to mend a rocky, rocky marriage. Frankly I think the fact that she hasn't hexed him so many times they would need a bucket to keep all his parts is a glaringly obvious hint that she is at the very least attracted to him, lol.

However, the guy dressed like a viking for her, so all is forgiven!! lol

Great Chapter. You are right. Two type A personalities in the same house with out some kind out boundary system is a disaster in the making.

Now, on to my review ^_^

Lucius and Hermione sooo need help! I mean hard core therapy. Lucius needs to learn how to open up, this includes, his mind, heart, and mouth! lol Hermione needs to learn how to really look at her self and also open her mind, heart, and mouth! I'm curious to see if she will take what Cissy said to heart and try to open up. I would like Lucius to do the same but that would mean him trying to talk to either Cissy or Severus and we all know he doesn't tend to do that.

I loved the description of Lucius dancing. Perfect movie scene in my head lol.

I am now going to steal Lucius and tie him up for a while and try to 'beat' *giggle* some sense into him lol

Can't wait for the next chapter,

Lady Serin

First off, let me say I would love to see Lucius in a Viking outfit. Just the thought made me squee! LOL
This was a lovely chapter though, my dear. I find it amusing that Lucius is just now catching on that Hermione is provoking him into spanking her. She really is rather cantankerous. Maybe they should play a game of King Cophetua and the Beggar Maid. That sounds rather fun. Hermione could deliver herself to Lucius