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person rini868
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I haven
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Funnel cakes are sooo yummy. I feel like they are go straight to my hips though. :(

Anyway, that was cruel of you to cut it off right there. LOL
I want to know what Lucius is going to do with Hermione on the balcony. NOW!

I can
person tsorg
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 21:

Boy, is she looking to getting drunk right off the bat? She does like to play with fire. I
person tsorg
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 22:

I do so love a devising Lucius as he continues to search for an angle into improving the relationship between him and his little termagant. I suspect that both Hermione and Lucius are very similar in that they both don
person tsorg
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 23:

He is sooo sensitive and she can
person lanetkrj
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this story today and it is sooooo good! It really held my interest and I can't wait until you update! I really wanted to hit both Lucius and Hermione on the head! Well this story is great can't wait!
person aliciana
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Right, Missy. It's the smut police for you. I've got a builder in, making my new en-suite and I've had to be quiet and stifle my moans. Shame on you...and shame on me. So what's he going to do to her up on the balcony? And where is this nightclub? Burnley or Manchester? She asks in hope. He must be good if he can seduce her with his moves on the dancefloor. But yes......it's always been Lucius that I associate with Ravel's Bolero. Anyway that's another fantasy. BTW...Cornwall exotic? Well yes.... very beautiful and the coastlines are majestic but bloody freezing and it chucked it down most of the week. Great history and fantastic cathedrals etc. Best wishes and good to have you back, Love Ali xxxx.
schedule November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
We need to clone this man.... WOW!!!!!!!! LOL
person aleysiasnape
schedule November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! *fans self* Must have more!!! Loved the part where Lucius got a bit defensive about his age thinking that the oldies sign was a reference to older men. *grins*
person jw
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 23 - poor Cissa is trying hard to help Hermione, who is just too stubborn and insecure to accept her advice. I wonder if Severus could/would advise Lucius. As for the dance floor scene -- OMG, that was sooooo spellbinding! I could just 'see' Lucius dancing in front of her, and what a hot scene it was. If this were a movie, I'd be rewinding that DVD over and over! Poor Hermione is so lucky; too bad she doesn't know it. Thank you for the hot chapter!