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person Joani
schedule November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, Update soon!
person aleysiasnape
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* Loved it! Poor Lucius, he doesn't want Hermione to leave him and vice versa. Both are too stubborn to admit they love each other. Looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, there will be spankings for Lucius only it will be with my favorite item ^^

Alas on to the chapter, I am pleased now that Lucius and Hermione have come to a bit of an understanding. I'm sad it too such an extreme action on Lucius' part to really awaken Hermione.

Hopefully in the next chapter Hermione will open up and they can finally find some semblance of peace.

Now, what do you think Lucius would prefer more, emerald green or onyx black? Hee hee can't tell ya why until you give me your opinion lol


Can't wait for the next chap,

Lady Serin
person rini868
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
For a second there, my heart stopped... I was like "Oh no! Oh crap! Shit!"

Wonderful chapter :)
person TStevenson
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 24:

The title for your chapter is so apropos! Hermione is so in lust that she doesn
schedule November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Twenty-Four: Have you seen Mr Rickman as of late? I love the man dearly, but let us be honest: he is sixty-three and he has a stomach. But do sic him on me. *giggles* This is your fantasy, LaBib, and I am merely an enthusiastic observer. If you want Severus to be some cut, hunky, tan fellow, what business is it of mine to disagree (of course, he would go nude, but doesn
schedule November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'd love to leave you a detailed review waxing on about my love of this story (and Lucius in general), but alas i am reader not a writer. so i shall just say that i'm really enjoying how this story is unfolding and that i'm looking truly forward to the next chapter :D
schedule November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, after that yummy chapter...... Let''s the games begin.......... ja ja ja
person aliciana
schedule November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well LaBib I do feel for Lucius but perhaps not as much as I should. Getting a bit serious now. His thoughts aren't so much focussed on losing Hermione specifically but on his family fortune and potential position as headmaster at Hogwarts. In order for the relationship to work they will BOTH have to compromise goodstyle. I understand him wanting to educate her on Pure-blood ways and traditions but he also needs educating in accepting Muggle-born ways too. After all.....it would appear that the Half-bloods and Muggle-borns are running wizarding society at the moment. Her acquiescence to him was endearing and does emphasise Hermione's generous and somewhat forgiving nature, something I hope he learns to appreciate and not exploit.We all want (well some of us anyway!) a good spanking and a bit of domination from the one we love on the odd occasion but it does have to be in a mutual and controlled situation. She (and he!) must have their safe words and get-outs if required. I mean I'm 5'7" and my husband's 6'6" and whilst not fat he's a big guy......a teddy bear actually......Hermione and Lucius are proportionally about the same so you have to believe you are safe when these sort of shenanigans are going on. Oh go on then....yeah......I'd still do him even after all that. See how easily I've capitulated. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.
person blue artemis
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not quite sure what to think yet. But you haven't lost me, don't worry.