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person aleysiasnape
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! I'm wondering if Lucius is going to tell Hermione about the orgy? Poor Hermione, she must be worried about him! Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
person rini868
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm all better now :)

It sucks that you can't put your review replies in the chapters anymore. Oh well... and I know you wouldn't let them be miserable forever. A bit of angst is always good, especially when followed up by a happy ending :D

Can't wait for the make up sex! lol
person T Stevenson
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 26:

Old times indeed, I was waiting for this little gem of a chapter to rear its head or should I say two heads (heh, heh). Of course, Bella would have regaled Narcissa with every little smarmy detail. I certainly wouldn
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! I am not normally a slash fan, but the way you told it was fun and funny. I loved Naricissa's little power play. Good for her! But, I think my favorite part was Severus' willingness to stop whenever she wanted to. That was lovely. Their nicknames cracked me up, too. Thanks for the giggle. :-D HG4eva
schedule December 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ROFL, definitely fun!
schedule December 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This keeps gettin' better and better I tell ya. Is it wrong of me to like the thought of seeing Sev and Lu *ahem* together? Makes me giddy with delight to see that mental picture. Very lucky of Cissy indeed if she could get to see that show. lol. Keep it comin' girlie. Btw, Happy belated Thanksgiving. :D
schedule December 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was fun fun fun ..... But to be honest I cann't wait to see what happend between Hermione and Lucius when he retuns.
schedule December 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was hilarious, I loved the idea of Severus and Lucius revisiting uncomfortable moments. Although the chapter was mainly ribald and funny, I believe that now Lucius has revisited the past, he may have some softening that will translate to Hermione so that they can prepare for your next plot twist, which we know is coming :) You do such wonderful character studies and I like the way you have really given Narcissa a voice and shown us the human side of Severus and Lucius.
schedule December 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I promise I will leave a PROPER review once I stop howling with laughter. "High-class manwhore" and "fastest mouth of the orgy"?!

Dear Gods, what a chapter! *dissolves into a fit of laughter again*
person blue artemis
schedule December 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed that chapter. I love the mental image of Lucius and Severus together, actually, but I think Narcissa was not being to nice about the whole thing. Except for what she did to Sev at the end, that was hysterically funny.