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person moregoth
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
They really are hard headed aren't they ;)
Lovely chapters!
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thankfully, I have broken the code to your little citrus warnings so I may yet escape this chapter with all of my faculties intact. 'May' being the operative word...

"How could that reprobate, Snape, create a happy marriage when his own efforts always ended in disaster?" - Seeing what Slytherin recipe for a successful marriage usually consists of... Snape IS a Potions Master and Lucius IS older than both of them so... *grins evilly* A trip to the Apothecary, perhaps?

"Neither spoke, Hermione because she was still dazed from her orgasm and Lucius because he was now living entirely in his cock" - And how thankful my little flock of Hufflepuffs is for this brief respite! Perhaps Lucius should consider moving to that particular residence permanently? I'm sure Mrs Malfoy would gladly help with... ahem... interior decoration.

"Only his
person jw
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 27 - yay, they're together again! I'm glad they're going to talk AFTER they both get enough rest; hopefully, they can talk without accusations. Thanks for letting them overcome their hesitations in this chapter!
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, detente. As someone once said, 'true wisdom is knowing when to shut up.' I really loved the characterizations in this chpter, that's always a big deal for me. That's not to say I didn't like the lemons, but you know what I mean. Looking forward to more!
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this. The indecision and nervousness on both sides. And they're reunion, oh so very hot with the underlying sweetness to it. Bravo Chicka.
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
By the way, I LOVED your Christmas card on LJ. Nice job.
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Guh.... Just.. GUH... Now that was HOT!!!

Makes me wish I had a BF just now..

SO they are agreeing to start over, that's great!
person Ithilwen
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That anon was me above.. forgot to sign my nick
person Mandy88
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Such a great chapter, i'm glad he finally came back home and they made up. Please update again soon!
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"p Love it Love it Love it!