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person aliciana
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Right it's official. I'm changing my name by deed poll to Hermione Jean Granger-Malfoy! Lovely to see them at last talking and compromising and shagging. See.........absence does make the heart grow fonder or the cock stiffer. Just parfait, LaBib. So, how are you going to top this one before Christmas? Can't wait me dear. By the way...loved the alliteration..."stiff staff" indeed! Ding dong! Should be out Crimbo shopping but my back's buggered. Hopefully the sleet and/or snow threatened for Lancashire won't come. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
schedule December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohwow, that was definitely a hot come back >D
person Joani
schedule December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! Update again as soon as you can. I look forward to the next chapter.
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely, touching and sweet... lol nah, girl, that was one HOTT reunion! And, yeah! They finally figured out that they don't really know how to talk to one another. lol Obviously, that won't work for long, as they will have to do something other than jump each other every time they are in the same room at some point. But, as a first real conversation, I will say it went rather well. :-D BTW - the Punch and Judy reference cracked me up, even though I was surprised Lucius got it. lol Thanks once again for the update and for the lovely Christmas card! HG4eva
person rini868
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay!

That's pretty much the only thing I can come up with to express my happiness for this chapter.

Yay! (maybe a Woohoo! too)

Woohoo!!!!
person blue artemis
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was very primal, but I think it was what they both needed to get them willing to start again. Very, very hot. And I never minded my husband sleeping on top of me when we first got married.
person lanetkrj
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
for most of this chapter i wanted to hit them both on the head but at the end i am starting to change my mind I really like this story so far can't wait 'till next friday!
lol on the short story :D
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Twenty-Six: It seems you've just posted chapter twenty-seven, but I still feel obliged to review this chapter as well. The revelations were certainly effective means of exploring the many different facets of their relationship and emphasising the complexities and nuances of it. And, of course, it was an excuse to detail some very sexy Lucius/Snape smut. I'm a fan of it in measured doses and think that it can be quite sensual when done properly, and you wrote it just right. Incidentally, I've no snark to offer in this review, LaBib, so do enjoy the respite while it lasts.

Bea
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My mouth was dry when I read this chapter. Every bit of moisture in my body went south. All I can say is: hot, hot, hot! I'm glad they're getting back together. I'm glad they're working things out. I do so love a marshmallow-y relationship. Although, with those two one of them is likely to light the marshmallow on fire and throw it at the other. ^_^ Goodness for everyone.

Looking forward to seeing more penis- I mean...plot...plot's what I meant. Aw...who the hell am I kidding? I want penis and plot!!!