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Chapter 4: There better be some smexy consummation soon...please. Of course, I still have much to read. SO back to it. I hope you don't mind that I believe in reviewing more chapters than just the last one when I am really enjoying a story even though it is so much progressed at this state.

Chapter 6 - More spanking please! Hehe. I am dirty. And Consummation! She should be a little nicer. But she is supposed to be a shrew! Poor Lucius. So stalwart in the face of that little wench.

Chapter 10: Hermione needs to tend to her sexy hubby! I would glad offer my services to Lucius if he were in need of them. She deserved it. He has to show her that he is the MAN! hehe. I think I may have set women's rights back a generation with that statement...maybe...

HORRAY FOR BEING BACK TOGETHER AND MAKING UP! Sorry I got to into it to want to be interrupted to leave reviews. Have now finished and caught up with the rest of the readers.

Halle-bloody-lujah! At last LaBib they're talking. And they can still have mind-blowing sex.....wonderful stuff. I mean I don't want to say I told you so but I've been advising this all along! LOL. And yes I know if I was writing the story a)there'd be no readers and b) there'd be no story or plot. Thank god you write and I read. So is Severus really miffed at his impoverished past being brought up or is he just baiting Lucius? I'm sure you'll enlighten us next time. Anyway from a very snowy Lumb in Lancashire to presumably a relativley sunny California I wish you a safe and happy Christmas and would be grateful if there was an update to read next Saturday (but I'll understand if there isn't).Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxxx.

Awwww! This was so sweet!!! Sexy, too, of course, but for this one it was really the cuteness that made me squee. :0)

Chapter 27

Lucius is so sheepish about seeing Hermione. This isn

Chapter 28

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No, I don't think Snape is controlling Narcissa via potions - I do, however, have a lingering suspicion he might be using them to control the... what was it, again? 'Application methods'? *snickers*

You REALLY make Manwhore and Fastmouth sound like an old married couple - if you're having half as much fun writing their parleys as I am reading them, methinks you ought to write a story from both of their POVs. It'd likely succeed where all the lemons failed - I'd DEFINITELY die... of laughter (though you'd probably have to come up with a new dyslogy... I mean, eulogy for my tombstone).

And the last line... oh, Gods! I've never thought I'd live to see the day when Severus Snape would wax poetic about any slight against him, real or imagined! Honestly, professor - 'You have just stomped on my feelings'?! *wipes the tears of mirth*

That realization that Severus had, where he and Hermione rubbed each other wrong because they were very much alike was one of my favorite things I've read. And then he follows it up with trying to teach Lucius what is wrong with his approach to things. As for Hermione and Lucius, I'm glad they are really working on making their marriage real. It is a good start.