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person Serranna
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm working my way through your story, having just come across it.

From Chap. 13---Lucius describing her as a honey-haired pocket Amazon---so wonderful!!

I love your elevated description of the art of sex

Bravo!
person aleysiasnape
schedule January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Especially the way Lucius is protective of Hermione. And he thought of a way to ease her fear of flying! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
schedule January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Why'd you stop it there??? And is the collar going to come out again soon? Please??? It's really good and I can't wait for more...
person Joani
schedule January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the update! I get more and more excited as the story progresses.....I have little patience usually, but this is worth the wait. Update again as soon as you can.
schedule January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, absolutely loooved!
person blue artemis
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That truly was a watershed moment. And I like that he cuddled her the entire way, it was sweet. I hope this bodes well, although of course, being at Hogwarts won't be fun for either of them.
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Twenty-Eight: *stumbles in rubbing bottom tenderly* Yes, yes, I
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know I know I've been gone for a while, but school gave me one heck of a whirl for a while there.

I'm all caught up and I love it. Lucius and Hermione are finally opening up!!!! *Owls them a large batch of cookies* It's nice to see then actually trying to make the marriage work with out so much...one way streetness to it all.

I hope that the bit of trust Lucius has received will be returned and that both of them will be able to live in the castle without much disharmony.


Can't wait for the next chapter,

Lady Serin
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was awsome!!!!!!!!!