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person Joani
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lucius better look out or she'll take a lot of advantage of her new found knowledge. ;) I like how this are progressing naturally instead of like most stories where one minutes they hate each and then the next their in love. Looking forward to the next update as always!
person aleysiasnape
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Poor Lucius having to deal with teenage girls. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person aleysiasnape
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chapter 36: Loved it! *fans self* Lucius wanting more from Hermione. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
person blue artemis
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Is she going to remember to tell him about the desire to hurt him? That was a big step for both of them, and I like that she managed to frighten him.

Those are both a couple of big steps he is expecting from her, but I think she will manage just fine.
person rini868
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Happy Valentine's Day!!

Ahhh! I couldn't help but laugh at parts of this chapter :D There were also a few snickers thrown in for good measure.

I think those who can't abide any prurience wouldn't be reading this fic, LaBib. Or be on the site for that matter.

I looked at the picture and I thought "How is this rated R?" *click 3 times* "Ohhhhhh!" *giggles*
person aliciana
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well Hermione....it's a dirty job being Lucius Malfoy's love slave....but hey! Someone's got to do it! Lucky tart. Right OK, that's got me in the mood. Where's me hubby? Oh I know. Waiting to take collection of his new motorbike. I'm not sure even the promise of bit of oral gratification could top that for him. C'est la vie. Great stuff LaBib. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx. PS Loved the pic of Lucius in his kecks.
person aliciana
schedule February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh! Just had another more detailed look at that picture. You naughty girl. It really shouldn't be allowed. But thank goodness it is. I'm a Nana for God's sake. Are you trying to kill me? "It was very sad" they said. "She drowned in a puddle of her own drool looking at a lewd picture of Lucius Malfoy!" Indeed! Best wishes and Valentine hugs, Love Ali xxxxx.
schedule February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Finally caught up! Lol. I loved all of the chapters and it was nice to see Hermione start to grow sexually. Now to figure out why she suddenly has these violent urges? Hmmm.... *Thinks*


Ahh well, I know I want to take a bite out of Lucius, but he would like what I do lol.


Can't wait for the next chappy,


Lady Serin
schedule February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was hot hot hot...... And was beautifly done!!!!!!1
schedule February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Grrr, evil LaBib! i get home from work, spot your update, and think, Ooh, how nice, a *tender* moment for our lovely couple... Now I have to wait again. Happy Valentine's day and enjoy your trip. Nice manip, by the way. Won't bother to mention the lascivious train of thought my mind is boarding, LOL.