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person dragon37
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was awsome. I almost hated Hermione for being in that position. Time for a cold bath. LOL
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hot sexy as hell and beautiful!
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good chapter. 1:20am too tired to think of anything else.
person j2
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ch 37 - I must protest your negative remarks on the poor brussel sprouts, one of my favorite vegetables! But I can definitely sympathize with Lucius that Bellatrix is enough to foul any memory, even beyond the level of disgusting zombie entrails. (and how do you think of these things???) I think Hermione is very happy to know she has some power over Lucius; she has learned the way to his heart is NOT thru his stomach. And yes, they are both holding back a bit of their heart from each other, but I'm glad Lucius knows it's just a matter of time. Thank you for the very hopeful chapter!!
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Even better than I'd imagined. She found her hidden power and learned to like brussel sprouts. ha ha ha Loved that analogy. I am, of course, waiting for the more to "come" along with her. That was hot and sweet at the same time. Brava, again! HG4eva
person rini868
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bleh! Brussel sprouts... his genitals are much more appealing!

Two brussel sprouts hanging? Good thing we never get them to eat, I can imagine myself cracking up in laughter if they were served to me.

Gah! You're really dragging this out aren't you? Not that I'm complaining... much.
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have this image in my head of a naked Lucius with his eyes crossed and a silly grin--LOL! Lemony good!
person aliciana
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes and........yes. Just answering your questions. What a lovely chapter, drawing out in eloquent detail, Hermione's first encounter with fellatio. And to have Lucius as her "experimental victim". Said it before.... she's a lucky tart.I see now what you mean in that their roles were on the verge of reversal with Hermione gaining the upper hand. Most men think with their dumbsticks and it's good to see Lucius is no exception. And let's face it. If it's not money or power that brings down a powerful man, it's sex. Though he did manage to slow down their proceedings. I think it was right and gentlemanly of him to not shoot his load as it were on her first go. Looking forward to the culmination of their evening. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx. PS Sev would know what kecks are. Good northern English word for underpants/y-fronts/skivvies but not usually sophisticated or sexy boxers! My husband uses it all the time.
person lemonade
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think it's fair that she learned to reciprocate. I personally wouldn't have responded well to someone *demanding* it, but since she kind of liked it, hey! It works! And I like the fact that we know more than he does about how much his wife cares about him, for some reason. It adds a certain charm to all of their machinations and dancing around each other. Hermione seems to have a few more clues than he does at this point, and I wondered when her brain would kick in and lead her there. Voila! I had thought that Draco would have filled Lucius in on Hermione's confession that she cared for Lucius, but apparently he's having fun watching Daddy-O figure it out. Slytherin!
person blue artemis
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad she realized how much trust actually was involved with that. She does have teeth. That was probably the best lemons for me so far, because they were both engaged. It was delightful to see her make him as crazy as he's been making her.