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person Anais
schedule March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I love your stories. I just spent a day and a half reading them all (at least I think I've gotten them all!) instead of, you know, studying or all that useless rot that students are generally supposed to do with their time. I think you're very creative and you have a gift for putting together plot and smut, especially with characters who canonically wouldn't piss on each other if they were on fire. (That's not to say that you write them out of character--I'm always pleasantly surprised by how realistic you make them!)

Please continue with your fabulous storytelling. And if you have an original novel (you said you were writing one, right?) then I highly recommend that you send it in to be published. You're that good.

Cheers,
Ana
person Joani
schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
They're getting closer and closer to trusting each other......and then soon after they'll learn to love each other, in their own way. loved the update! Sadly I'm going to be going away for two weeks for job training so I won't get to read any of your updates until I get back. :-(
schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely :D And I like the talk between Snape and Hermione!
person dragon37
schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I do believe Hermione would be Lucius's Lioness, if anyone tried to hurt Lucius in anyway, I think that would include family and friends. The lasr chapter was really good, can't wait to read the next.
person aliciana
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And why wouldn't Lucius want a season ticket to Manchester United? They've just beaten Aston Villa in the Carling Cup Final. My husband's company has a private box there and the one next to us was empty last time we went. He could buy that one.There are no decent teams to support from Wiltshire. But I digress.Severus was a bit hard on Hermione wasn't he? He wouldn't really threaten her with any true conviction, would he? Lucius would not be pleased. Loved the piccies and the lemons. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh how I wish I wasn't so darn tired. I want to say so much more than thank you. That was delicious from start to finish. I loved the fact that she realized little pieces of her heart had found their way to his care. Lovely, simply lovely. And, her defense of him to Severus...great! Thank you again. Off to bed... HG4eva
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really must be impressed with Lucius' stamina--three weeks before finishing his lemon? Wow!! or should I say Rwowr! LOL. The malapropism was just adorable. Nice chapter, LaBib.
person jw
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ch 38 - wow. That was a tough convo between Severus and Hermione, and I'm very glad they finally cleared the air. Poor Lucius, forcing himself to pretend he didn't see things, so that he could keep his friendships. Lucius is much happier now that he and Hermione are moving toward a real marriage. Thanks for the new chapter. And thanks for not maligning the poor brussel sprouts again!
person rini868
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lemons were good! I'm glad to hear that plot is coming back, I've been missing plot :)

Yay! A Lucius laugh :D

person alecto
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
there is something actually so intimate about the man from behind position, even if many writers manage to make it constantly and solely into one about dominance. kudos to you for doing so and showing us the softer side!