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schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hello,

they're obviously so magic if they can't find chores that give a real hard work-out but aren't considered abuse. my parents we're great at devising torture methods for punishment that weren't technically physically harmful. i never want to chop another tree, pull up weeds, dig holes, lay bricks, or stand against the wall and then sink down as if sitting in a chair (but there is no chair) with my arms held out in front of me parallel to the floor. it's really hurts after 2 min and making it the 5-10 my mom insisted on always seemed impossible. if all of that failed, there was getting on my hands and knees and scrubbing the floors with a 2"x4" scrub brush. A few hours of that and movement the next day was questionable. lastly, why not sign the girls up for kick boxing? i take that a few times a week and it gets the stress out, so does spinning but that makes your butt sore. thanks for the quick update.
person dragon37
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would love to try to make certain Slytherin's happy, LOL! The only thing that came to mind when everyone was together, was, sounds like a war room, with Severus as the General, and Lucius as the right hand, and Hermione as the left. Everyone else as scouts.
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! Love when there are long fics!!!!
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey there. I really enjoy the story part of this story. lol The idea of it all is quite inspired on your part. :-) I giggled out loud at the idea of Lucius handing out corporal punishment to all the student offenders. But, I must say, my favorite part of that chapter was their almost discussion of their feelings. They are getting much better at expressing themselves and reading one another and it's lovely to see. You are doing a fantastic job of making their relationship evolve in a very "real" way. Thank you!! See you next time. HG4eva
person aliciana
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OK LaBib so we've a new premise going on here. I'm aggressive and want to kill you but if you spank me I don't want to kill you so much? Sounds fair enough and a jolly nice way to keep oneself out of Azkaban. I do enjoy the boys' bantering and baiting of each other. They bounce off each other like wound up rubber bands. Nice to see some reconciliation between Draco and Lucius going on too. But really LaBib....Saint Severus? Now that conjures up an interesting image. An angel with his halo hanging off his horns. Hmmm? And this bloody perfume....why the sly bugger. Poor Narcissa will not just be a bit wobbly but resemble John Wayne after getting off his horse! That happened to me you know on my honeymoon in Ullswater in the Lake District. For the first (and last) time in my life I went horse riding. I was bow-legged. My new husband was getting many approving looks from men and women! Ahhh....happy but sore days. Best wishes, love Ali xxxxx.
person aleysiasnape
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it! I love the part of Severus and Lucius discussing Hermione and Narcissa. To include them on their planning. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
schedule March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww...I just love the interactions between Severus and Lucius. They're such snarky little bastards, but you can almost taste the affection (affection, not confection ^_^) in their words. They know each other well enough to cut deep, but they also know when to back off.

I'm quite glad to see those Slytherin minds hard at work. I always love a good bit of conniving. I'm eager to see what this force is, and how it was introduced. I was thinking along the same lines as Snape, about the food and water, and maybe a potion, but the spell makes sense. If it's a spell, what kind, and who cast it? Is there a bigger problem for our heroes to worry about than a shrinking purse and horny little students trying to pinch their goods?

Good as always. I also loved the interaction between Draco and Lucius. You can see them both trying to be good, and still being themselves all wrapped up in two sexy little packages. Lovely. Just Lovely. Look forward to more, dear!

~DragonFyre
schedule March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chappy. Wish I could lay my hands on some of that perfume.. behold the possibilities :D
I also can't wait to see what's causing all the Pureblood problems. Very intriguing. Keep it coming chicka.. Well done!
schedule March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
They are so stuborn they are in love yeapy!!!!!!!!!!!