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There's no such thing as an overdose of lemonade! I loved it as always. I was thinking, though, wouldn't Lucius just die if Hermione said she'd want to reciprocate anal. hehe. I love your piccys on LJ btw. I can't wait for next week. :)

I liked their interactions, whether it was Hermione wielding the brush or just learning to like each other. I think if she allows herself, Hermione will be pleasantly surprised by what she can enjoy from the anal sex.

Robbed?!?! o_O Oh no!

Oh how I would have loved to witness Hermione barking "Be still!" at Lucius.

It took him 15 swats to stop being irritated? He must have been mightily annoyed...

Oooh! Lucius ironing! It's like "Porn for women" all over again ;)

"hair ribbons soaked in depilatories" Ouch! That's most heinous!

Hogwarts should have always had a sports program. I've wondered more than once how they managed to keep trim if they were constantly being fed fatty and sugary foods by the elves. I mean, we never heard mention of a garden salad or the students drinking water, it was always tarts, pumpkin juice and sausages.

"Someone made a killing selling the stupid prats hair oil made of common Vaseline scented with cloves, telling them it had a secret ingredient to make them irresistible.

First, I must say thank you for the nice long chapter! It was so nice to read something I loved and then glance over at the bar and see I still had half a chapter to go! :-) Next, my immediate thirst has been quenched, thank you. But, I wouldn't say no to more. *insert big cheesy grin here* Her early morning realization put a tender, happy smile on my face, so thank you for that, too. My favorite line - "...spit-flamb

I find the fact that both of them are unsure about 'handling' the other and they both want to be cautious. I hope they find their way.

She bought herself a car! Fabulous!

I'm so glad they are starting to find common ground. I hope they continue to build themselves up.

i think you should do the hand cuffs and lucuis should where them....

angel

I think the fact that they were both enjoying the game really made this chapter for me. It was a lot of fun to read. Four handcuffs? Hm. He would wear them, and I would use two to make sure he wouldn't get loose. Hee. OK, now my mind is wandering.

I was on your LJ looking for your entry on chapter 41, so I clicked next entry on the page for chapter 40 and I got one about Porn for women. Immediately I saw the xkcd cartoon and I thought "OMG! Wow! This relates to the fanfic?!?!? *looks at title of entry* Oh...".

About the reviews to readers ratio, it's probably higher than 1.5% if you factor in the reviewers who come back and read the chapter again, or don't remember whether they've read the latest chapter yet and click to check. Though I guess it wouldn't be too much higher...

Mmmm! Lucius in a tux ;)

Vive la France!

Oh no! I don't remember Step 6 but I think, Lucius could wear them :)