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person aleysiasnape
schedule March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* That scene was hot! Hermione having her way with Lucius. And I loved the part where Narcissa got on Severus for calling students names. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
schedule March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters as always!!!

40)Lucius needs to realize that Hermione really has no one to talk to about her life and that things are going to slip when she's constantly subjected to Narcissa. And he should recognize that Draco says the things he says to get a rise out of him and make him mad. You bet Draco's blond arse Lucius has served him up as dragon bits!!!! That mean little blond!!!!!!!

Ok time to chain those two to separate chairs facing each other, feed them truth serum and make them face their issues in the marriage!!! Honestly, this secret stuff needs to be fixed lol.

As to what is happening with the pure bloods, I think it's more then likely a toxin of some kind maybe a potion, but its much easier to introduce things into the water system then people think. And Lucius needs to get his mind out of the gutter! If he got caught spanking students he would still be labeled a perv!!!! Bad Lucius!!!!

41)I wonder if Lucius ever thought to just CALMLY explain his past to his dear wife, maybe then she wouldn't flip out with every revelation.

I am going to dig out some truth serum and begin designing the chairs... Ha! Hermione the tease! She had better learn this trick well! It will so come in handy lmao!

42)Finally! She tries to take the freaking reigns!!!! Me thinks Lucius should learn to let go more often. I still say they need to test the water systems! I am now ready to tie our lovely couple to their chairs and dispense the truth serum! *Evil grin* Hermione needs to stop comparing herself with Cissa. *growls* And if Lucius tries that ploy, I think Hermione might catch on and I can just imagine the bruised butt he'll have for that!

Great three chapters! Can't wait for the next ones!

Lady S
schedule March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I find it interesting that the females are being affected most. Has anyone seen what Molly Weasley is up to, these days? Hmm? Although as a pureblood herself that's not likely, but she might go for attacking Slytherin house; the pureblood attacks might be an unforeseen side-effect. this story is beginning to remind me of that line from Kipling: 'The female of the species is deadlier than the male'. Maybe they should check for muggle testosterone; in small doses it makes females very aggressive, with an applied charm it could target purebloods, but the delivery system has me stymied.
person Angelbaby
schedule March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh you terrible tease. I've been reading your stuff long enough to know that you will make us wait now that we know what is ahead. You'll post the ball next week and the fun and games after the ball the following week. You realise that two weeks is a long time to wait to read about Lucius and his naughty ways.
*Sigh*
schedule March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How sweet, Lucius is dreaming of his first time with Hermione. He
person alecto
schedule March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh fabulous - they are getting along a lot better now. Time for the reckoner, Hermione!
person jw
schedule March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ch 42 - aha, the old "my first wife did it" trick! :=) Good to see them communicating well. I'm surprised that Draco didn't examine the hair pomade before trying it; I think of him as being smart enough to not fully trust something that comes via the students. Not that the students did it maliciously; I'm sure they were all taken in by the source. Is this related to the anti-Pureblood stuff? Thanks for updating!!
schedule March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sexy steamy and beautiful...........
person lemonade
schedule March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, what is wrong with lemonade? lol I'm glad Hermione had some fun. And I thought it was pretty funny that Draco had purchased the hair pomade, that was cute. The yule ball sounds like it will have some sinister potential. Yikes!
person Joani
schedule March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! It's good to see them getting along and compromising. Loved the update and of course....looking forward to the next one!