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Silly Labib, suggesting I go read your other stories. I've been reading you for years i'm just to lazy to review all the time and I constantly change my name, so I have reviewed you before you just don't know it. (Always keep them guessing, heehee). Yah one more week until naughtiness.

Lol! If April Fool's was 1 day later, you would be dealing with a lot of unamused readers :D

I can definitely see Snape making money off products with dubious, cheap ingredients.

And regarding Lucius being a groper... lets just say I can give as good as I get ;)

I like your pictures btw :)

ch 43 - The one thing that most stuck out to me was that Hermione walked in to see Lucius and Cissa dancing, yet she didn't just react and bail. She also calmly talked with Draco about his parents. She is finally confident enough in her marriage, and is set to get Lucius to love her. Not sure how or when she and Lucius will discover they already love each other; I wonder if Severus and Cissa will have to step in with neon lights. (heh!) Thanks for the new chapter!

The reaalization on both of them was simply enchanting!

No itch, I like to dance! So now that both have had their separate epiphanies, it should be fun to watch them trying to manipulate each other to the same destination, Lol. Severus was cute, I had forgotten about Lucius' wand being dysfunctional.

By the way your record for 'the most chapters before the main characters have sex' has been broken, I think. 'Harvest Moon' by DarkePhoenix has gone 51 with only one kiss and a whipping. 'Beyond the Veil' was only 22, I think, but I could be wrong--only read it about twenty times.

Their in love now.. YAY!! Even I had butterflys and nerves for them. I can't wait to see all that happens before and then when they admit to being in love with each other. Well done you. =)

Aw hon, I

Hi LaBib. Thanks for your kind words last time. They're much appreciated. Oo'er missus! What a fantastic chapter. And yes she should be ashamed that he could still sleep on his arse. She needs to do some weights and develope biceps like Madge! I just love your writing. There's a formality that belies the total tongue-in-cheek attitude of it all. I almost hear Sir John Geilgud's voice in narration. Just brilliant. Hmm...next chapter.....not too sure about the back door stuff meself. Still everyone to their own. And I would love to come to the ball but I'm off to my boat and caravan in the Lake District this weekend for Easter but would adore Sev and Lucius keeping me some private dances for when I get back. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx. PS Great image of Sev sitting on a kid's desk. Personally I could see him as the kind of teacher who has his feet up on the desk especially if only his Slytherins were around.

I loved Hermione's attempt to take control. It was cute. Like a kitten trying to gnaw on a lion. I'm sorry I didn't review your last chapter. I've had a nice spoonful of life shoved down my throat, and I choked on it. I haven't even updated Riverbend in probably a few weeks. God I'm behind.

Anyway, enough about me. I love your characters. You always write them with such fluidity and grace. One can only stand back and admire the way you create them. And I do admire them, from head to toe. *Smiles* I love your lemon scenes. Such detail and sensual description. I have no experience to draw on, and so I rely on what others write. Your citrus is quite a model, I tell you that.

Well, I'm glad I finally got a bit of free time to drop you a few lines to tell you how much I appreciate your story. maybe now I'll go finish the chapter I've been working on for Riverbend for two weeks. ^_^