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How lovely! I adored the reference to Priapus.
A very lovely chapter - I liked the way Lucius unravelled just that little bit mid-anal sex.
Can't wait for more, as always.

Of course Lucius' goals will change--as his perceptions of her change so will his focus. As his emotions change, what he wants will also change. I think that in public at least the appearance of utter control and traditionalism will satisfy most of what he wants now, but in private he too will have to learn to accomodate his spouse's needs. Just like she just did. Lovely lemons, labib!

Wonderful update. It's so refreshing to see Luc written as something other than an evil git...****grin's sheepishly as I'm guilty of that**** Love like he seems to feel for Hermione is something very new to him I would guess, so I can't wait to see how he reacts to the inevitable changes that will take place in his attitudes. I'm guessing, with Hermione's realisation of her own love for Luc, that she'll be willing to take more chances and follow his lead more often. Kink aside, this is such an intriguing story and I find myself thinking about what the mystery could be.

Have fun at the wedding....OH! and PS....thanx for your wonderful review on my piece. It totally made my day!! :)

Chapter 43

But, LaBib, I was eagerly anticipating that preachy homily on the virtues of abstinence. Darn. *sigh*

Anyhoo, lovely chapter. I kept thinking of this pic, while I was reading. http://www.maythemusebewithyou.com/ballatmalfoymanor.htm

I know you

love what is happening to our favorite couple and i am dying to see how you are going to going to go about hermione finding-well maybe forcing him to love her is better, though it will be rather funny cause i think lucius will know what she is trying to do. but if he doesnt i do know it will be lots of fun to watch and i am dying to read more i do hope that you will be updating on time! :)

loved the update!! i started reading beyond the veil and i'm loving it.......i've almost finished that one.

I came across this story quite by accident just yesterday and have devoured it completely. What an incredibly well written and interesting story line. This is a scenario I've not seen anywhere before and I'm very interested to see where it goes.

This isn't a pairing I would ever normally read but as a fan of Shakespeare, I was intrigued to see how you would take on the daunting story and mold it to fit the genre. You've done a brilliant job thus far.

The character progression feels real, though frustrating at times. Being privvy to both sides of the equation and knowing what's going on in both peoples heads and hearts makes me want to yell at them at times for not seeing what's obvious to us.

Can't wait for more....a lot more!

BRAVA!!!! That was the absolutely most perfect way to have them come to their private realizations, without losing their characters even a little bit. I am so impressed with you right now! Hermione's warrior instincts and Lucius instant disgruntled fear, masked in anger, were spot on for the two you've written. Can you hear me clapping? Severus' take on things was also quite enjoyable. Again I say, I love their friendship. I even enjoyed Draco's foray into the scene. lol I only hope the poor woman doesn't have to stand for a week after Hulunbuir invades Hum (Croatia). lol I even looked that up just for you! ;-) Crossing my fingers for a better than "tolerable" night for them both. :-) Thank you, as always, HG4eva

I managed to shanghai Kingsley for a while, but he was so damned big that it was kind of awkward for him, so I just went and sat in the corner. I read your reply to my last review, and it made me blush that you gloat over the praise of the likes of me. I just try to write the way I would want to read.

But anyway! Harry and Ginny are expecting! Gracious they work fast... Once again I just want to spear-tackle Snape to the ground and strip him naked. With Lucius standing in the wings waiting for his turn, of course! I am so jealous of Hermione right now it isn't even the least bit funny. Your Narcissa is just adorable, really. I kinda want to pick her up and squeeze her like one might a fluffy pink teddy bear.

Hmm...less caffeine tomorrow night, maybe. Ah well. I hope to have my next chapter of Riverbend up. I'm working on adding a bit of smut to apologize for it being too late, but right now I'm just trying to make everything fit just right...Anywhoo!

Looking forward to your next update, my lovely! ~Dragonfyre

I think they are forever going to be a cross purposes, but if they ever do figure out the depth of feeling the other has for them, they will be a formidable pair.

I love the idea of the vermin being in the coach house with a happy Crookshanks.