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Awesome as usual. So much for my air pollution theory!

I hadn't thought of the paper--the colors explain the prevalence of it among the girls and would make them far more aggressive. Should have known, you never mention something in one of your stories that has no significance (i.e: the wand sale in 'Beyond the Veil) or purpose. thanks for the insight into Sev and Narcissa's relationship, it was believable and quite tender.

Thank you for the Mother's Day gift............

Loved it! Yay! They found the source at last. And that Lucius is looking forward to the twins. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

lmao OMG! On his arse?! Really?! That's hilarious! I love it! Great way to figure it all out! I never would have thought about the paper, even with all the clues at the beginning of the chapter!

As for Lucius being in love, I swear if he doesn't figure it out soon, I'm getting the veritas potion and shoving down his throat and making him confess!


Great chapter, can't wait for the next one,

Lady Serin

ch 48 - aha!! Brilliant tactic for transmitting the chemical. I never suspected it; I just figured lots of females would like colored parchment after centuries of only plain white parchment. I am glad Cissa realized Severus would be hurt at being the only one who hadn't received masher notes, as it shows more of the strength and affection in their marriage. Yay for Hermione and Draco figuring it out! Thank you for the fun chapter.

That was really a fun chapter, even if there wasn't any smut. I really liked the interactions between all the characters.

I've always thought the ROR was like the Holodeck in Star Trek:TNG and once it became "sentient" when it produced a real life Professor Moriarty. Ahhhh......happy days! So Hermione's hormones are turning her into a nympho.....I remember the feeling well and Lucius is a victim of his own success. Serves him right. One should always be careful for what one wishes for. Loved the oldies getting a bit tipsy. Sorry it's short and sweet but we're in the throes of a General Election over here and it looks like being a Hung Parliament. More impotantly however a third of my front garden has been dug up and concreted awaiting a fairly big summerhouse. And not only that but I celebrate twenty-eight years of wedded bliss tomorrow (Yes I know. You get less for murder)and have to get my hubby a pressie. Till next week. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.