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OH, and I love the Harry hair pulling thing. I am surprised he didn't ask Hermione more questions about getting married to a Malfoy, but it was good to see him.

Long story short, I am quite taken with this story! There are stories one reads purely for amusement, and there are the stories that draw you into the fanciful world they weave, and this story falls into the latter category! I waited until the very last chapter to review (which was no easy feat!) so that I could culminate all over my thoughts and feelings on this particular finely crafted work of art, but I cannot! The emotional ranges I experienced while reading this gem over the course of the past few days are far and wide! I generally don't ship Lucius and Hermione (I'm a Dramione sort of person) but this story fits them so well together that I'm hard-pressed to place Hermione in any other pairing! The quips between those two are both witty and scathing, and their slow realization of their feelings was something so naturally done it was wonderful just to watch, er, read it! And the Snape and Narcissa pairing I would have never guessed, but here it is, working just as dynamically as Lucius and Hermione (though admittedly, I find Lucius' and Hermione's relationship much more entertaining). I love the way you have portrayed the characters and the situations they have gone through, it's all unbearably realistic, which is a refreshing viewpoint in any story! And the sex...I shan't touch upon the sex scenes, simply because I fear suffering from third-degree burns! Siz-zlin'! You've definitely mad a fan out of me! I shall promise to become a faithful reviewer in the future! Thank you so much for such a wonderful story!

Loved the updates....been sooooo busy. I can't wait to find out how this will all play out. And who's the bad guy? maybe someone we know??

Another excellent chapter.

Don't faint but I'm early for once. Of course Severus was going to receive loads of love notes. How could he not? I'm sure he got a couple from me too. So the toxin was in the parchment? Is that old biddy who slapped Cissy anything to do with it, I wonder, rather than the shop itself? It's good that Cissy's got some work to do. And that Sev is curbing her spending habits. Obviously she is learning that the best things in life are free. OK, good plotline......so it's back to smut soon is it? Excellent. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.

What no Sevvie love? I can't believe you stopped the chapter there (LOL).
Sorry I only lurked for two weeks, had to read and run with work being crazy busy and all.
I like a pregnant Hermione, her changing moods are so funny.
Her little spat with Draco last chapter was really funny too.
So the plot thickens can't wait to see where this is going.
I just love your stuff, every chapter is good reading.

Well, the paper makes perfect sense. That's why the woman went crazy coming out of the stationary store and hit Cissa and Hermione. Now that they know what the problem is, how are they going to be able to fix it without putting that store out of business. I doubt Hermione would want to hurt someone's livly hood, Unless of course they are doing it on purpose. Then I'll bet she tells them to take the place out.

Happy Mother's Day!!

I now know without a shadow of a doubt that you are undeniably brilliant! To know that you sat back one day while stirring your coffee and listening to the children playing in the background (just my mental picture) and thought of all of this, blows me away! I love the idea of the paper that was mentioned in passing so many chapters ago being the culprit. Plus, I like Hermione then Draco being the ones to solve the riddle. Seeing them work together, even a little, was lovely. Thank you for letting us know that Narcissa is finding her strength and backbone, and that she is thriving under Severus' care, despite the rear-end bruises. lol Brilliant, simply brilliant! Thank you, HG4eva

The parchment! You DID use that store as the distributor of the drug! Cyber cookie for me! Love the Snape and Narcissa.

I don't mind the plot, lol. It's amazing that the culprit is so simple. I was baffled and tried to think of some ridiculously elaborate scheme, but it's simple yet effective. Love the resolution :D I like your charater building, how even after marriage you can learn something new, even for seemingly perfect couples (such as the Snapes). Most stories leave off at the happily-ever-after, but you go beyond that.
Can't wait for more chapters!

I find Severus and Narcissa very sweet.