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That was scary but sweet at the same time....... They need to say it........... Repeat with me Lucius and Hermione...... I LOVE YOU.. well know you have to practice......... LOL............ As for the epilogue I wish I can see a house full of children but also smut smut smut........... LOL

I've been a lurker but faithful reader. What an exciting chapter. I loved the culmination of many things: the plot, Narcissa and Hermione's friendship, Hermione's own personal journey, the emotions of all the characters. Alot to get in but nicely done.

Oh and epilogue - the four of them definitely, with children. Sev with kids is too priceless. Draco finally at peace and happy. A little smuttiness would be lovely.

Loved it! I'm curious as to who the mystery person could be? Poor Lucius being jealous that Hermione might leave him for some younger man.
Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Hello me dear. Early-ish again for me. Too much time on my hands. Hubby is off on a barging holiday in the Norfolk Broads with three of his mates so I'm on my Bill....(Billy No-Mates). What a good progressive (though smut-free!)chapter. It's OK honestly. I'm not really a sex-starved, depraved Severus/Lucius/Sirius/Remus addict. I'm a good and pure Nana (48 years young) who's missing her husband. But I'm digressing again. Who is Cleopatra Jane Grey? The "Jane" made me automatically think of Umbridge initially though what HER motive would be I'm not sure other than that she is a malicious, conniving bitch. I did enjoy Harry's appearance even though like Ally McBeal I found him quite unnecessary to my enjoyment of books/programmes etc advertising a main character. Do you get what I mean here? I liked everyone except Ally McBeal.Nuff said.No....Young Harry was being quite mature after he appeared to realise that Hermione seemed more than happy with her lot in life and her husband.So it's Wednesday lunch-time here in lukewarm Lancashire and I now have to take our muckle (Scots word meaning big/clumsy,) great labrador Harley out for a walk. Oh yes, I'm really missing my husband. Till next time. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.

Hahaha at Grandpa Snape - he is not comfortable with that thought at all! And some lovely reminiscences there - lovelier for the readers hearing about them than for the men reliving them, indeed. That whole Death Eater orgy sounds like a scream. I can just see Bellatrix demanding 'harder, you lightweight, harder!' under the whip. Ew at Amycus and Alecto though!

So Hermione is having her time in the wilderness - I am eager to see how their reunion will go. Humble pie all round, but especially for Hermione, I reckon.

*glomps Harry* I'm a fan of a well-written Harry. Our little dear has grown up, and he's still catching bad guys, bless him! I loved the interaction between him and Hermione. Almost like brother and sister reunited. Poor Lucius, he's so jealous his face is turning green. Tsk tsk. Well anyway. Sorry I didn't review the past couple chaps. I had end of term and finals to deal with. I put up a new chapter of Riverbend if you're interested.

I want to see more Harry. Not a lot...just a little more. ^_^

Chapter 48

This was a lovely chapter, LaBib! It was informative too. I was wondering why you were mentioning all that pretty parchment early on in the story. I have to laugh about the student that had traces on his bum. LOL

The scene with Snape and Narcissa was lovely. You

Chapter 49

You write a great Harry. I like how you made him clever, coming up with a great idea to rid the school of pretty parchment. He also came up with a crafty way to get the owners to close up shop. He

I hope they find the bad guy.......I'm really curious as to whom it could be. Lovely update as usual.