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Loved it! Hermione and Narcissa getting along together. And Lucius saving Hermione! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Ooooh this was an action packed chapter. Cleopatra is of course bonkers, isn

That was a lovely and intelligent chapter. I loved that their past horrific experience was able to aid Lucius and Severus in saving their wives. Also, I know Lucius isn't stupid, so I am really happy that he will finally know that his wife cares about him for real, even if he doesn't quite get that she loves him yet. :-) Last, Hermione's easy acceptance of that criminal's punishment by Severus was highly amusing and showed her "growth." Thank you, hon! I eagerly await the next chapter.

I was not expecting her to show up......though I did think it was her. Looking forward to the next update!!

It took me a few days, but I finally got to the end of chapter 50! I'm not much for het stories, but I am in love with this story. You've done a fabulous job and I can't wait for the next chapter.

I just so happened had to reread this so that I can catch up. I haven't read this wonderful tale in a long time, and I am glad I did. I truly wish for one more chapter then an epilogue before you end this. Would like to see not only how Lucius and Snape react when she starts giving birth, but also some of the most wonderful language that she will spew during labor pains. I think it would be very comical. Plus I would like to see years from now where Hermione and Lucius have a real wedding. Something that was mentioned in a previous chapter in regards to a white dress. She let it slip to Lucius how she would have wanted to have a real wedding instead of the "shotgun" one she had to endure. Other than that I just wish there was a way to get an alert for this, or else I would have been reading this masterpiece weeks ago.

I absolutely love your story. I've just sat and read it (all 50 chapters of it!) in two sittings, to the detriment of my exam tomorrow. Please, PLEASE add more chapters soon, I'll be able to justify reading them after my exam! I simply adore your interpretation of the characters. I've never been a Lucias fan, but now.. well.. I wouldn't kick him out of my bed, that's for sure!

WOW! While I feel bad for Desdemona for losing her Mum in such a horrible way, that's no excuse for hurting so many innocent people. And she might not have known that Hermione was pregnant when she set her plan in motion, but she couldn't have missed it when Hermione went to sit down and then to cast that hex was unforgivable. She may not have known that it would cause a miscarriage, but really, what did she think would happen to a pregnant woman who was subjected to that curse? She's apparently short on common sense. I'm betting Luc gets a knew wand the minute he can move.

As for the epilogue....I'd love to see an anniversary, a renewal of vows in a full ceremony and maybe a peek at the Twins starting school.

ch 50 - oh, my...... that was a surprise villain! Makes sense that nobody thought of an unknown witch from Beauxbatons. I hope the boys remember to thank Crookshanks; perhaps Lucius will stop wanting to kick him. :=) Salazar's portrait was very helpful too. I'm glad Cissa and Severus were there to support Hermione. Any chance of repairing Lucius' wand? He's going to have two more babies soon to protect, and a wonky wand is not reliable. Perhaps Draco - after someone tells him what happened - can create another ointment that is less sticky. Wouldn't Lucius' scalp also hurt because of the nerve endings? Can't avoid getting the goop in his hair then. THANK YOU for the new chapter and for the reveal!!

I'm glad they found the witch causing the problems. I had kind of figured it was the clerk, but I wanted to see how it was going to play out. I think Lucius now has a deeper regard for Crookshanks.

I love the small bits of interplay, and Lucius stepping in front of the curse for Hermione was amazing. And of course I appreciate the humor of too much salve.