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person aliciana
schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes. Of course there will be thongs and a delightful cornucopia of all things kinky and naughty. I'll even ask the guys who are at present filling the hot-tub to leave the garden hose out!!!! My friend's dad used to live on the shore of Loch Etive where they have done some HP filming and we went to said Dad's funeral a couple of years ago and you know what.....I think I saw those two kinky, exhibitionist buggers feeling each other up. Coincidently I also met Auntie Em at the funeral who had met Alan Rickman and Emma Thompson whilst he was filming and directing "The Winter Guest" in Fife. But as usual I digress. LaBib, I'm really going to miss this story and your brilliant, witty, eloquent writing. There's so much dross in fanficland and it's just magic to read something as good as yours. I'm not really even a prolific Herms/Lucius 'ship reader but you may have converted me. Hopefully there's still a little bit left to go but like the lucky people who haven't yet watched the (British) "Life on Mars" series (sorry but the American version was just pants)they still have it to do......meaning I can start reading your back catalogue as it were. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx. PS That piccy of Lucius....shouldn't be allowed.....but thank God it is!
schedule June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WHoo! I totally forgot to leave a review for this chapter. I really thought I had. Oh well. I'm glad Hermione has begun to truly enjoy every aspect of their sexual relationship. They are so adorable together now the fluff is almost suffocating. Just kidding, doll! Anyway, I do love a well-written lemon or two, and you serve up lemonade quite well.

Draco is such a little player. He won't settle down for a while yet. Either that or he's going to meet a witch that will quite literally take him by the balls and hold him tight. That would be amusing, to say the very least. ^_^

Anyway, hope everything is going well and I look forward to the rest of this story. Is there another story that the great LaBib is working on? I do so enjoy your story crafting.
person Joani
schedule June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
so sweet! draco's ego is quite large i see, lol. loved the update!
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, LaBib! Two-headed caped creatures, I shall have to search for one of my own! ;)
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome as always! Seeing such Lucius produce as much tenderness as he can is interesting. I wonder if he will eventually unravel that mind of his even a little for Hermione and his eventual kids with her.

Draco's inter musings are interesting as well. It makes me wonder if he will be single all his life because he is so overly curious if the next woman will compare to the ones he's already have.


Can't wait for the next chappie!

Lady Serin
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sweetie, this was a heartfelt chapter. My heart leapt for joy as Lucius and Hermione talked everything out, explaining how they felt and that they loved each other. I think everything is coming together beautifully. You even had Lucius and Crookshanks come to an understanding. LOL My only distress is that since all the loose ends are being tied up. It means your story is coming to an end. I
person jw
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ch 52 (okay, I'm pretty sure this board ate my two previous attempts at leaving a review for this chapter) It was good to see the growth in their marriage. Little things like Hermione not minding that Cissa worked with Lucius, open communication, affection without resentment... I'm glad you took time to build up and develop their relationship! BTW, who will be the new Headmaster and will the Snapes return to Hogwarts next year? Cissa needs meaningful activity during her days. Thanks for the new chapter!
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely with the humor in it.............. Simple irisistable..........
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow. Your writing continues to astound me. I am not a backdoor person, but you even made that yummy and beautiful. I once again bow to your superior skills. :-) The two of them exploring one another's psyches while trying to honestly get to know one another is lovely and fun to see. Their newly accepted love makes me smile. Thank you! HG4eva

Oh, the last pic on your site didn't show...
person April
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good and smutty chapter. :)