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Chapter 54

You crack me up. Lucius is the worst submissive in the world. Hermione sounds very commanding though as Captain Mistress. I suppose Lucius better watch out before she ties him to the mast. LOL

I have to laugh at the thought of Lucius as a Chav and screaming like a girl. They really do have an imaginative sex life. As always there banter is the best part. :D

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Lucius as a poodle? ROFL! I can see where he would still have a few problems with his emotions; and the memories of Voldie would definetely cause a little skittishness about certain issues. Maybe she should have strung him up and just flogged away with a cat o'nine tails--much more butch, even with the rhinestones on the collar! Hmm, maybe I will have to break out the word processng program... Later!

Very funny and a great ending to a wonderful story............ I can wait for the epilogue../

There is little left to say, but Brava! I will miss this story when it's over, but I am sure you won't keep us waiting too long before you give us more of your fantastic writing. Thank you, HG4eva

Such a lovely ending. It's always good when a couple can be so open with each other and find their palces in teh relationship. It makes things progress smoothly. I believe they've chosen their sides quite well. Hermione is definitely better at the emotional end of things as it's such a new thing for Luc. While I'm excited to see the epilogue, I almost think it doesn't need one. I love it just as it is. Thanx hon!!

Holy fudgecakes, I finally get to review! It took several tries just to read this particular chapter, and several more just to review! Whew! But as I was reading this story, I thought back to the very beginning of Lucius and Hermione's relationship and again, I am so very impressed at the progress they've made (and so very happy that you, too, think that a romance is more than the hero/heroine meeting a handsome/beautiful stranger and immediately falling in love, and falling in bed not long after)! What a journey of twists, turns, snippy comebacks and hot sex! I had to laugh when I thought of Hermione's previous attitude towards Lucius, and how she would aggravate him just to get him to spank her and show her a bit of attention. And now they've got a family of their own...gosh the WAFF is just too much! Agh! I'm saddened that this story will soon be coming to an end, but I really would like to see just how it ends. Sigh...perhaps there is another story in the works that is just as spell-binding as this one? I get the shivers just thinking about it!

Loved it! I can definately picture Lucius buying lots of toys for the twins. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Another story I am sad to see come to an end. It was one hell of a ride, so to speak :P

What a lovely chapter and you have delightfully tied up all the loose ends. It was good to see that Hermione was not a mard-arse (whiny softy...no screaming like a girl for her!) whilst giving birth and just got on with it. However I do agree that it is necessary, nay, compulsory for one to want to cut off the balls of one's impregnator(is that a word?)with a spoon. Because, of course "It'll hurt more!" But really LaBib I take recourse with Lucius changing a nappy. Every other male in the universe be they wizard or muggle, yes absolutely but Lucius...no, no, no. I mean it would be the end of civilisation as we know it if he got a speck of zinc and castor oil cream in his barnet or god forbid some baby poo! And with twins the odds are doubled against him.OK...here's the deal. The last chapter and epilogue must be over 100,000 words each in length. Does that sound fair? Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
PS Being the good Scot I am I was supporting the USA agianst England in the World Cup last Friday. TeeHee! And before you think it's terribly unpatriotic I once heard an English player declare that he didn't care "Who beat the Jocks" so the feeling is entirely mutual even if I am half-English.

Awww......babies. I love babies, so long as I can give them back when they pee and poop. Actually, I can deal with pee. It's the poop that mommy and daddy can have back. And Narcissa and Sev are going to be so cute with our little girl. *sniff* They just grow up so fast. One day they're terrorizing children and spying for the Light, the next day they're married and babysitting. Oh Sevvie.

Adorable. The birthing scene was perfect. And poor flustered Lucius trying to ease her pain the best way he knew how - by yelling at people. He's a sweetheart, bless him. I'm glad we got to see the bebes. Looking forward to whatever story you bring out next. I know it will be a doozy.