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Chapter Three: The plot thickens! I must confess that the mention of a turkey baster in your livejournal entry left me slightly perplexed and worried. The turkey baster? Already? I usually don't whip that out until the second date... Hahaha. Just kidding. It's usually the third. ;-) Anyway, lovely chapter. More of those cutting exchanges that I love so much and the impeccable characterisation I've come to expect. I am constantly dazzled by Lucius's silver tongue; that man could talk his way out of anything. Anyway, if I were Hermione, I would be convinced; put a ring on my finger and carry me across the threshold. Though I can't say I'd need much convincing in the first place. Eager for more (partially so Snape can insinuate himself into the scheme of things)!

Bea

Another great chapter.

Oooh, Lucius is so conniving. *snerk* hiding the part about her having to leave any Malfoy children behind with him if she leaves.

I had so many favorite quotes from this chapter. "Oh yes, this little spitting sprite was very much beginning to bring out his predatory nature. He could feel it twitching in his trousers." That was SO funny.

And can we please have a wedding night next chapter? Please!!!!! And don't a few ridiculous reviewers keep you from all the lovely kinkiness. Jade will always hold a special place in my heart after your last story.

Chapter 3

"My Pureblood way of life and the status derived from it have gone the way of the chartreuse horklump"

This line killed me!

Lou is a sly son of a gun,isn't he?Poor Hermione.Stuck with him for how long?Poor,poor Hermione if she like I'll take her place...Can't wait for more!Yes I even rated 5/5.

Hermione is a bit naive. I think Lucius is going to quite enjoy introducing her to the wider erotic world. I can see that leaving the contract open was a huge mistake on her part (well, except for the getting Lucius thing, I rather like that coming out of it). But I also think Lucius will be in for a surprise. She does love to learn.

The bit about the turkey baster...brilliant! It always cracks me up when Lucius finds out about a new, completely repulsive (in his opinion) Muggle technology. I wonder what he would have said if Hermione suggested that he freeze it?

Chapter 2

How could I not be on board? I love your stories! :D And I have no doubt that you have written a most convincing Snape.

Ok...onto the chapter:

Oh that verbal back and forth is awesome!

"She damned well better not have a crush on that dark-haired git or Lucius was going to be using his riding crop on a much more tender little backside than the thestral flesh in his stables." My my! Not even married yet and he's already jealous! Hmm Lucius with a riding crop...*drools*

Oh. Sorry I wandered into a daydream for a moment... ahem.

And a crush on Snape to boot! Mouahahaha. I can't wait to see Lucius' reaction when he finds THAT out!

Fantastic chapter LaBib! :D

I am impressed by your extensive vocab. Even out of the published works I read, most do not have a constancy of eschewing big words. I can tell you are a better writer than most in fanfiction. Now onto the story