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schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, but one thing. You got the quote wrong. "If you can't be with the one you love, honey, love the one you're with." Silly I know, but I love that song. It's even understandable that it could be done so by Lucius, but it rankles. Excellent work and I hope to read more soon.
person rini868
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Train compartment scene *giggle*

Oh no! You spelt view wrong in the chapter title :(

It looks like it wasn
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love their verbal jabs at one another, i've always imagined it to be mostly foreplay for Lucius to wind up Hermione in a lot of fics and this doesn't seem any different, :)
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AHHH another lovely story by the great Labib!! Sorry I am late to the party of reviewers, once again this has the makings of one of your fantastic stories. I look forward to a many chaptered, gripping story from you!!
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That is the perfect setting . fights, passion and regrets on the first and then..... a happy marriage... with a lot of fights and reconciliations.. Lovely!!!!! I can wait!!!!
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I do believe Hermione and Lucius may have met their matches. Neither of them will give up on their position. I can't wait to read more.
person Jesse
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The spark was there again for sure, but regardless if it was there I am pretty sure I would still read your stories! I loved Hermione trying to explain the turkey baster!! What a perfet clash of worlds you have created! Can't wait for more!!
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter!

I love all these philosophical discussions that Lucius and Hermione have.

Slytherins don
person jw
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 3 - wow, she is really being a shrew. I'm impressed with how calmly Lucius is in presenting his arguments and answering her questions. I wonder if you'll have him get his hands on a real turkey baster -- for educational purposes, of course. Looking forward to Draco and Severus getting the news. BTW, since you live in the area, will you be attending Azkatraz in July? Thanks for the new chapter!