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schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. I'm loving this Lucius so far. Really great update, I can't wait for more!
person Lurker
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, since you asked so nicely... I'm enjoying this story. Slow goings, but it always is in the beginning when characters are being introduced. I like his mindset; he's interested in an actual relationship. I like Hermione, intelligent and spirited. I love your stories, as a rule, so I'm looking forward to following this one.

I'm sorry for the succinct review, it's early in the morning, and I have to be up early. All my feedback is positive, anyway, and I promise I'm not easily pleased. Perhaps I'll flatter you a little more expressively next time. :)
person lonne2
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Allright!But my review better count for something!

I'm a very big fan of you stories, I think they are fantastic!
This one is starting great, but it's still to early to tell where it's going.

I really love that you finish all your stories before you post them, it gives us, the readers, the security to really enjoy the plot-bunnies that haunt you from time to time.

=)
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I do attend Turkey Basters Anonymous (TBA) once a week and have been sober for two months, thank you. I must say that you are so clever, my dear. You actually make veritable literary allusions in a fanfiction which is astounding. I hate to be a Nosy Parker and you needn
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories, I cant wait to read the next chapter
person jw
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 4 - Lucius truly mucked up by forgetting THAT room! They need to talk openly at breakfast about what happened and why he moved her to the bed, but I'm not making bets on their ability to communicate at this stage. I wonder if she will let the house-elves serve her..... THANK YOU for the new chapter!
person VoraciousReader
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I felt very badly for her having that flashback, but the wake up scene made it all better. that was great, especially Draco telling Lucius 'father, you stink!'
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
To be honest I think Lucius is very sweet, but absentminded.. Da!!! Drawing Room.. I just cannot wait for their consumation of the mariage. That promise fireworks better than a 4th of July... LOL
person aleysiasnape
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chpts 3 and 4: Loved them! I especially love the banter between Lucius and Hermione. Looking forward to the next chapter!
person Jesse
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a terrible thing for Hermione, being forced into the Manor again. I loved the interactions in the bedroom though! I loved Lucius' pjs!! Too funny!! I cannot wait to see where you take this!