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Yeah more! Great two chapters. Once again Lucius got away with more, as the secret phrases in the contract! But I was glad to hear Lucius imply that he wasn't going to cheat on her. No more going to muggle bars for Lucius. Chapter two was also good, I was glad there wasn't too much hoopla surrounding the wedding ceremony. It was so old-fashioned though, it seemed like it akin to something performed five-hundred years ago. I really did feel sorry for Hermione when they entered the Drawing Room. It was very realistic with the notion of the Healers teaching her of the inner place to go to.

*giggle* Three giants and Hermione.

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The idea of Lucius being such a deep sleeper and Hermione smacking him to wake him up had me giggling my head off!

Hah! I like hearing Hermione's point of view. She's full of wit(well really you are my dear, but for the sake of all things fanfiction, we'll say Hermione is)

I'm not quite sure where this is going, which I like. I'm not a fan of stories I can tell the ending to in the first few chapters. I like a little confusion and mystery clouding my reading material, it just makes me want more of it.

And more I do indeed want!

I'm quite enamored of this Lucius, and his neon green wriggling snake pajama's. He seems to have depths in him I rarely see in a fanfic Lucius Malfoy. Or that I even sensed in J.K. Rowling's Lucius Malfoy.
I am always delighted by your work, and as with every story I read of yours, I am hooked.

I can't wait for more wit, verbal lashings, and some smut ;)!
I also can't wait to delve into the man that is Lucius Malfoy to you.

'Till next time dearest!
xo
dM

p.s. I promise to try my hardest to not be a lurker from now on.

Brilliant update! I had to snigger with the thought of Hermione telling the old farts at the Ministry that they have to terminate her marriage due to Lucius having a cock to big for them to consumate said marriage. Lucius would probably not stop gloating for the next 100 years, except when being chased by old witches who wants to sample the goods them selfes....:-))

Hermione needs to suck it up and jump him, then maybe he won't wear those horrible sleep pants because he will be naked....Oh that was my fantasy. Thanks and happy writing.

Who knew that Lucius would be so compassionate? I gotta say, I melted a bit when he held her in his arms to calm her down, murmuring sweet nothings in her ear, then put her in a separate bed but close to him so he could be near her. Hidden depths and gentleness to the man. Hermione is unaware of what Lucius has done, will she know at some point?

It's a good thing Lucius only put on the pajamas for Hermione's sake, I don't think he would normally wear them otherwise. It must be the only pair he has because I can't imagine Lucius would ever wear anything distasteful!

Okay, I want to wake up holding Lucius' ahem...cane... I'm surprised he didn't wake up from any squeezing she may have been doing on her part... Then she bops him on the head? That is not the way to wake the man up! I'm looking forward to the taming! Great story, LaBib!

Hello! So first off I did a little jig when I saw you were posting a new story! I have to say I'm quite intrigued by this "mystery" behind why Lucius chose Hermione as his beloved wife *snickers*. And while we're on that subject I don't think it's polite to keep thinking of said wife as a Mudblood - perhaps this is a defense mechanism on Lucius's part? As for this chapter I loved the part where Hermione shivers from Lucius's touch and attributes it to repugnance...hehehe. And as for L flooing them into THE drawing room all I could do is shake my head. Trust Lucius to turn stupid at the most critical point - I could only shake my head. And it got worse when he thought about overwhelming Hermione with the grandeur of the room, contemplating the gilt work - at this point I was ready to smack him upside his beautiful blond head. But he did do well in comforting her afterwards. I personally think Hermione wasn't just waking Lucius up by smacking him; she was also getting some revenge for his being such a brainless git ;).

See this is what you get when you ask people to de-lurk - they go on & on. Anyways I just thought I'd express my appreciation of your work, especially since L/Hr is a relatively rare pair but one that I enjoy reading.

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