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schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh. I kind of feel bad for Lucius. For some reason I keep visualizing him as a lost, slightly naughty puppy who's desperate for love and affection but not quit sure how to go about getting it. And that makes me want to snuggle him. Fantastic update, I can't wait for more.
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Five: Well I'm twice-surprised that we haven't met! I sneak into Spatula Twelve Step every so often. They have better snacks! Anyway, I promise not to throw bricks at you because I have faith in your ability to make almost any pairing believable. Though, I believe I have now developed a twitch at the thought of the dinner parties Lucius has to suffer through. Marrying your best mate's ex-wife is cold, I mean, positively gellid. I wait with baited breath. Also, I'm thoroughly in love with Lucius now. I may have lusted after him, liked him, thought him charming, but now I simply adore him. He's so considerate, generous, and lovely. And Hermione is just the luckiest thing. Those apartments! I would be torn between sleeping in his bed or my own. Very sexy scene there, by the way. I must remember to read this alone, as the giggles and chirps of delight aren't necessarily appreciated by my slumbering companion.
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-5: Alrighty then =) I don
person Rainie
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok I got blind sided by the MAC truck known as Narcissa and Snape. So maybe that's why Snape was so pushing this union. LOVE the "pajama python", so much better than trouser snake. Happy writing and Thanks.
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome .. i love it .. please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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person blue artemis
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Snape and Narcissa? I've seen that one before, sometimes good, sometimes not. I'm guessing yours will be good. If they actually told each other some of the stuff in their head it would make their relationship easier. Of course, it would not make as good a story. I really like that he agreed to put off sex as an apology. She probably thinks he's disgusted by marrying a Mudblood. That was really a lovely reaction to being swatted. Sounded like an excellent morning to me, anyway.
person rini868
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! Lucius
person Jesse
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved that chapter!! The spanking and aftermath was too funny!! A very hot moment between the two. I can't wait for more.
person alecto
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
coaxed.

good character development in this chapter. a crooning lucius makes my day. can't wait for the next installment.
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw sweetie, I