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July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another chapter. It will be interesting to see just how much trouble Hermione will give Lucius. I am looking forward to the next installment.
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July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 4 and 5
That morning kiss was delightful!
Great job on your description of Hermione's new rooms! The moving wallpaper is a very nice touch which makes the Malfoy home more magical.
Thanks for those lovely words of yours!
That morning kiss was delightful!
Great job on your description of Hermione's new rooms! The moving wallpaper is a very nice touch which makes the Malfoy home more magical.
Thanks for those lovely words of yours!
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July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOT DIGGITY DAMN!
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July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story so far, can't wait to read more!
I was a little nervous at first because honestly The Taming of the Shrew always kinda annoyed me, poor Kate was treated a little unfairly I think. I get the feeling that Hermione won't be such a doormat in this.
I was a little nervous at first because honestly The Taming of the Shrew always kinda annoyed me, poor Kate was treated a little unfairly I think. I get the feeling that Hermione won't be such a doormat in this.
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July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, maybe Lucius wouldn
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Especially the wake up call Lucius got from Hermione! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There is absolutely nothing to sigh over. That chapter was great! I like HG paired with several people, so it's all good with me. lol Her innocence cracks me up. And, all of your different ways to say penis make me giggle. Thanks for the continued laugh. And, the snogging session was hot! I think she's going to go up in flames in a week. ;-) Yes, I'm jealous. ha ha ha
Looking forward to more really soon,
HG4eva
Looking forward to more really soon,
HG4eva
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, I loved that kiss! And even more the fact that it was preceded by her slapping his butt and then losing track of what was going on because his butt was so hard. Lol, I squeaked, I laughed so hard at that picture. My vote is that next time she spanks and then runs away and sees what happens then. And yay for the comment about Lucius liking spanking! I can't wait!
And he chose books for her? I'm in love.
And he chose books for her? I'm in love.
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOLD THE FORT - SNAPE MARRIED NARCISSA??? Did I miss it before???? Well, that was...um, yeah. And she was a door mouse in Lucius' bed? Yet, vibrant enough for Sev? I'm on a carousel, but don't let me off please - go faster. I said FASTER, damn it.
So many lovely things in this chapter. So many funny moments, lines, situations, thoughts - too many to name and I know you know what they are. Though the whole Lucius contracting an STD and then having it treated the Muggle way was too funny.
Hermione and Lucius are both mirror images of each other to a certain extent, aren't they? Both left by their companions - I won't say loves because I don't know if their perspective partners really were their true loves. Oh Ron loved Hermione, Narcissa loved Lucius and vice versa, but I think it was a caring type of love. Let's continue, shall we? Both Hermione and Lucius are lonely and alone. They desire the companionship that comes from being a relationship, there's comfort in that. They are both sexually frustrated from here to Timbuktu - obviously, something was slightly lacking in their previous partners. Oh they satisfied a need but their passions were barely scratched, from what I gather in this chapter. If it weren't for the fact that he was a former Death-Eater and she a Muggle-born, they would actually realize they have lots in common: intelligent, wit, low tolerance for idiocy, passion, etc.
Again, you surprise us with Lucius' tenderness - and that's what it is. Not taking her and just satisfying himself. He's in this for the long haul and that desire to make things "right" and "good" with/for his new wife tells us so much about him. It actually makes him vulnerable, though he'd see it as weakness. The ironic thing is that Hermione would be a puddle of goo if she was skilled at Legilimens. I also really appreciated the realistic POV that the man would be a one-minute wonder if he tried to do the deed right then and there. I'm sure wanking off in the bathroom helped sort out his head (and we all know he did that). No need for a scene on that...we all have an imagination, no?
I loved the scatteredness of Hermione's thoughts. It was perfect. I actually had to read that sequence twice because I was thrown a bit by the randomness of each new thought. She was bouncing around. And it hit me in the line "Hermione began to tap one foot in irritation" - she's flustered, horny, and definitely confused. It was a perfectly grounded in a reality - that is how a woman would probably react. LOVED it - I think Stanislavski couldn't have conveyed it any better in any of his books about acting - being grounded in reality despite the ridiculousness you feel you might find yourself in. Oh and trying to call him decrepit and old, low blow Hermione! LOL The man is "hung" as you noted.
Lovely tour of the Manor - thank you. I can't believe he's waiting a week? Is that for her or for him? Make sure he's got the stamina! LOL And I wonder how long she'll have her own rooms before he ties her to the bed?
PS: Hermione totally missed Lucius' spanking warning....Oh please let her try it again! LOL
So many lovely things in this chapter. So many funny moments, lines, situations, thoughts - too many to name and I know you know what they are. Though the whole Lucius contracting an STD and then having it treated the Muggle way was too funny.
Hermione and Lucius are both mirror images of each other to a certain extent, aren't they? Both left by their companions - I won't say loves because I don't know if their perspective partners really were their true loves. Oh Ron loved Hermione, Narcissa loved Lucius and vice versa, but I think it was a caring type of love. Let's continue, shall we? Both Hermione and Lucius are lonely and alone. They desire the companionship that comes from being a relationship, there's comfort in that. They are both sexually frustrated from here to Timbuktu - obviously, something was slightly lacking in their previous partners. Oh they satisfied a need but their passions were barely scratched, from what I gather in this chapter. If it weren't for the fact that he was a former Death-Eater and she a Muggle-born, they would actually realize they have lots in common: intelligent, wit, low tolerance for idiocy, passion, etc.
Again, you surprise us with Lucius' tenderness - and that's what it is. Not taking her and just satisfying himself. He's in this for the long haul and that desire to make things "right" and "good" with/for his new wife tells us so much about him. It actually makes him vulnerable, though he'd see it as weakness. The ironic thing is that Hermione would be a puddle of goo if she was skilled at Legilimens. I also really appreciated the realistic POV that the man would be a one-minute wonder if he tried to do the deed right then and there. I'm sure wanking off in the bathroom helped sort out his head (and we all know he did that). No need for a scene on that...we all have an imagination, no?
I loved the scatteredness of Hermione's thoughts. It was perfect. I actually had to read that sequence twice because I was thrown a bit by the randomness of each new thought. She was bouncing around. And it hit me in the line "Hermione began to tap one foot in irritation" - she's flustered, horny, and definitely confused. It was a perfectly grounded in a reality - that is how a woman would probably react. LOVED it - I think Stanislavski couldn't have conveyed it any better in any of his books about acting - being grounded in reality despite the ridiculousness you feel you might find yourself in. Oh and trying to call him decrepit and old, low blow Hermione! LOL The man is "hung" as you noted.
Lovely tour of the Manor - thank you. I can't believe he's waiting a week? Is that for her or for him? Make sure he's got the stamina! LOL And I wonder how long she'll have her own rooms before he ties her to the bed?
PS: Hermione totally missed Lucius' spanking warning....Oh please let her try it again! LOL
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ch 5 - 'Snape had married Narcissa' - ROFL! I'm impressed that Severus and Lucius remained friends; I hope Cissa and Severus didn't hook up until after the divorce, rather than Cissa and Severus cuckolding Lucius. Lucius will notch up another 'Idiot' point when he realizes he insulted her by not offering to let Hermione share his bedroom, even if he expected her to refuse. I'm not sure why he was offended by her wanting to Apparate. Couldn't he send elves to her flat to get her clothing? Uh-oh, I have to wait another week for the next chapter! I shall try to be patient. Thank you for the new chapter!!