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schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like how Hermione is wrong footed in all of this. And, lol! Believe it or not, I read stories more for plot and at times skim over it to get to the meat. So, don't tempt me to beg you to skim some of the smut! I might. ;D
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't you dare cut out the smut! I almost had
person ccrawley
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Greatly enjoying the story. Thanks.
person aleysiasnape
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Especially the dinner scene. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are a goddess when it comes to Lumione stories! I always laugh when I read the interactions between Lucius and Hermione. And the part where he told her that the boxers were a treasured gift from Draco that he'd never worn... he's such a piece of work. I was quite sad not to see the spanking happen considering how much Lucius was thinking about it, but I am quite excited to hear there will be smut in the next chapter. Maybe the one could lead to the other?
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I finally got a chance to read this chapter today! It
schedule July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6: As a non-cat lover (allergies) I have to say I enjoyed Lucius's taunting of Crookshanks. Still not certain how I feel about Snape with Narcissa...but thats prolly the green dragon rearing its head, I love Snape.....if I could have the power to make a fictional character come to life it would be Snape =)

Anyhow....looking forward to more fireworks, I really love a good argument. Always have....I wonder if Hogwarts had a debate team? I was on the debate team, loved it.....ooops, rambling...sorry....well done =)


Happy Writing!
S_G
person rini868
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Were there many throwing bricks at the Snape/Narcissa pairing?

Ha! Lol-ness :) I can't believe she managed to get a car in AND consult a mechanic about parking it in the barn!

Hehe! It's not his money. Teehee! This just keeps getting better :D

"That had only added to his funk, so the newlyweds had decided together it was time for Lucius to be married again."
I love it how they just decide that Lucius should be married and off he goes and gets married ^.^

Huh? What? A temporary measure? You mean he actually wants Draco to live with them? Bleh! Maybe Draco could conveniently find a girlfriend while he's off living on his own and being independent and whatever, marry her and move to France or something... I don't want him being around the Manor if he's going to be such a grumpy bum.

schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yes I was finally able to catch up on the three chapters I was behind. There is too much to comment on. Very tender scene when Lucius was comforting Hermione after her break down. Maybe there marriage isn't as bad as it could be,(of course I already knew that LOL). I laughed my butt off about the mini green Coup! How did she manage to get the mechanic to park in the barn? LOL The comment about the Laptop and Wifi had me rolling on the floor again. I hope Hermione gives Lucius hell while she is pretty much locked in the manor, is he ever going to let her out? I can't wait to see what the next chapter holds.
schedule July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this story since it was first posted it, and i really like it. however, something seemed off to me and i finally figured it out. When Lucius stated that it he wanted more kids and it was okay to have them with Hermione because he had Draco to carry on the pureblood line, it hit me that Hermione should be bothered by that statement, i know i would. He's created a nasty trap here. Hermione and the second set of kids will wonder if he loves them as much as he loves his first son because they're not "pure." No matter what they do or accomplish, it won't matter, because Draco is the golden child. Well, by his logic and what he said Hermione, that is. It's terrible when parents play favorites, and I can't see Hermione standing for that crap and coming to blows over it. If he really wants more kids, he needs to get over a few things, or he'll lose his wife and kids. Just because they live with you doesn't mean they want to be there, and teenagers can make you wish they weren't there. I hope Hermione thinks about all the crap Lucius said that day and sets him straight on a few things.

thanks for sharing your story.

Jillian