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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope Lucius is playing in his zen garden. He may have a corollary from this chapter alone. *chuckles* I would have thought Draco at age 10 would have some fashion sense, but I guess not since he bought Lucius those hideous pajama pants.
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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7: Lucius would make a rather dashing pirate, or a viking...I can see him now, shirtless, wearing nothing but a torque, perhaps some ornately carves cuffs around bulging biceps, a large sword raised above his head with a little smirk on his lips...oh...sorry, got lost for a moment ;)....scented candles on the dinner table would bug me I think, I actually slipped into my dining room to dig through my china cabinet and make sure my dinner candles didnt smell LOL (All were uncented thankfully). A little nookie on the table sounds fun though, I think Lucius should have her there just because he said it was inappropriate, and he should have fork marks in his bum just for the hell of it =).
So...do I read correctly in that you too have considered a Hogwarts debate team?
Happy Writing!!!!!
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So...do I read correctly in that you too have considered a Hogwarts debate team?
Happy Writing!!!!!
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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There was something about this chapter that I just loved!!! I loved Hermione's dinner antics!! And Lucius' suggestion at role play was too funny!! I agree with his statement that he would make an excellent pirate!!! Hmmm... Pirate!Lucius!!!!!!!!!!! Anyways... I love the speed this fic is progressing at. Just enough hints at the main plot and some excellent character interaction. Don't change anything!!!
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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Five
I'm behind in all my reading but what a wonderful treat to look forward to reading!
I liked how she immediately noticed that with the one swat she could feel that his backside was especially firm. It would make me want to peek and uncover said "arse", especially looking for the two lovely little dimples that grace an especially fine ass!
Ohhhh, I want to be the one waking up Lucius, he can grab me anytime!
I'm glad that Lucius saved Snape, I love stories where he didn't die.... seems rather unfair that in the HP books his life was so miserable. So it's very nice to see he is up and about busily scheming with his best bud and I assume, happily married to the lovely Narcissa!
Funny that she is so desperately looking for anything that might keep him in bad light in her eyes, he's decrepit, ancient, has problems using the loo or he must because he's in there for such a long time, he's a Malfoy, and above all HUNG. Yeah, I see her pulling up in her mind this mental picture that keeps Lucius in the "bad category" but I suspect she won't be able to keep that up if Lucius has anything to say about it.
I'm behind in all my reading but what a wonderful treat to look forward to reading!
I liked how she immediately noticed that with the one swat she could feel that his backside was especially firm. It would make me want to peek and uncover said "arse", especially looking for the two lovely little dimples that grace an especially fine ass!
Ohhhh, I want to be the one waking up Lucius, he can grab me anytime!
I'm glad that Lucius saved Snape, I love stories where he didn't die.... seems rather unfair that in the HP books his life was so miserable. So it's very nice to see he is up and about busily scheming with his best bud and I assume, happily married to the lovely Narcissa!
Funny that she is so desperately looking for anything that might keep him in bad light in her eyes, he's decrepit, ancient, has problems using the loo or he must because he's in there for such a long time, he's a Malfoy, and above all HUNG. Yeah, I see her pulling up in her mind this mental picture that keeps Lucius in the "bad category" but I suspect she won't be able to keep that up if Lucius has anything to say about it.
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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The day will come when she'll relish in being drawn into his "sensuous web".
He expects her to ring the bell without letting her know that she's meant to? After all that talk about how she's of a lower class, he really expects her to know quite a lot about upper class etiquette.
To actually set up all the cutlery is a lot harder than using them... *sigh* the things you learn in home ec.
"The highlight of the meal for her was when she tucked her napkin into the top of her dress and plopped both elbows onto the table as she ate. The look on the blond wizard
He expects her to ring the bell without letting her know that she's meant to? After all that talk about how she's of a lower class, he really expects her to know quite a lot about upper class etiquette.
To actually set up all the cutlery is a lot harder than using them... *sigh* the things you learn in home ec.
"The highlight of the meal for her was when she tucked her napkin into the top of her dress and plopped both elbows onto the table as she ate. The look on the blond wizard
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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6:
Uh oooooh, testing, testing, testing. Hermione is seeing how far she can push her big blond hunk. Love the car by the way, my husband's car is actually a green mini cooper if you can believe it! The automobile seems perfect for her, I could so see her tooling around the estate in her little car to check out what and where things are!
"If your sperm count is low," oh ouch, Hermione can really send those zingers right where they will prick him the hardest. I'm surprised he ignored it but I suspect he knows he's being tested, perhaps he wants to see how far she'll push?
I love that you have Lucius still close to both Narcissa and Snape so they worry about him. That means they will be interested in the direction his marriage takes, wanting him to be settled as opposed to restless.
I sense an impending battle coming up in the next chapter... at dinner no less!
Love the story, wonderful writing!
Uh oooooh, testing, testing, testing. Hermione is seeing how far she can push her big blond hunk. Love the car by the way, my husband's car is actually a green mini cooper if you can believe it! The automobile seems perfect for her, I could so see her tooling around the estate in her little car to check out what and where things are!
"If your sperm count is low," oh ouch, Hermione can really send those zingers right where they will prick him the hardest. I'm surprised he ignored it but I suspect he knows he's being tested, perhaps he wants to see how far she'll push?
I love that you have Lucius still close to both Narcissa and Snape so they worry about him. That means they will be interested in the direction his marriage takes, wanting him to be settled as opposed to restless.
I sense an impending battle coming up in the next chapter... at dinner no less!
Love the story, wonderful writing!
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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7:
Don't apologize for no lemons, you are building up incredible tension between the two. Hermione is walking a very, very fine line and has no clue as to repercussions! Whatever you are building up to is gonna be HAWT.
Does she really dislike the scent of the candles or is it because he makes her feel so contrary? I suspect the latter.
I think all of the cutlery and dishes and glasses would throw me off as well. I'd be watching to see what he used before picking up the utensil! She sure does like to push his buttons, you'd think she'd remember not too push too hard but the fact that she enjoys seeing him lose control is interesting, it's like reading about someone poking at a beehive with a stick thinking nothing too bad will happen....
Yes, his patience is coming to end, I was wondering how long he would last, first he insults her wardrobe then he is riding roughshod on her table manners. I suppose I'd do the same thing as she to retaliate against his snobbery! Boy, Howdy, taking her meals standing up, another comment that sailed over her curly, little head. She should be glad if she hasn't realized it yet he gives warning before taking action. The man is getting turned on by his snippy miss.
His study sounds amazing, I'd like to curl up in there, sounds like Hermione would like that too. Oops, I spoke too soon, she does know he gives warning before action and what is she doing? She is pushing, pushing, pushing. Goody, sounds like role-playing will occur down the line as well! The two of them are going to combust shortly if the tension continues to mount!
I think the next chapter is going to be a good one! Awesome story, LaBib!
Don't apologize for no lemons, you are building up incredible tension between the two. Hermione is walking a very, very fine line and has no clue as to repercussions! Whatever you are building up to is gonna be HAWT.
Does she really dislike the scent of the candles or is it because he makes her feel so contrary? I suspect the latter.
I think all of the cutlery and dishes and glasses would throw me off as well. I'd be watching to see what he used before picking up the utensil! She sure does like to push his buttons, you'd think she'd remember not too push too hard but the fact that she enjoys seeing him lose control is interesting, it's like reading about someone poking at a beehive with a stick thinking nothing too bad will happen....
Yes, his patience is coming to end, I was wondering how long he would last, first he insults her wardrobe then he is riding roughshod on her table manners. I suppose I'd do the same thing as she to retaliate against his snobbery! Boy, Howdy, taking her meals standing up, another comment that sailed over her curly, little head. She should be glad if she hasn't realized it yet he gives warning before taking action. The man is getting turned on by his snippy miss.
His study sounds amazing, I'd like to curl up in there, sounds like Hermione would like that too. Oops, I spoke too soon, she does know he gives warning before action and what is she doing? She is pushing, pushing, pushing. Goody, sounds like role-playing will occur down the line as well! The two of them are going to combust shortly if the tension continues to mount!
I think the next chapter is going to be a good one! Awesome story, LaBib!
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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know I said that I was desperate to know what they have planned but you are the author this is your baby so I say stick with the smut(lets be honest who doesn't like that)then get to the plan. I will wait and I hope you stick with what you have planned. I loved the whole dinner scene and hope Lucuis sees where he might have to give a little also besides Hermione changing everything for him and his pureblood life style. Thanks and Happy Writing.
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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you wicked, wicked woman. You know we want the smut. My life's been crazy the last few weeks so I just got to this story, so I guess it's been easier for me to read so many chapters at once. However, I like a big buildup both for the sex and the mystery. As always your writing is above par. I'm eagerly awaiting Lucius and Hermione getting more intimate both physically and emotionally. I'm also very curious about this version of Severus and Narcissa. At least we know more than Hermione. That something is going on, so I'm content for now to find out what exactly that is when Hermione does.
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July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bring all the smut chapter you want my dear!!! Yours had been always very special.. As for Lucius I always saw him as a viral, funny and very playfull guy .. So hey he is hot, sexy and very very masculine.. LOL More please!!!