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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So if I promise to send you home cooked brownies will you update soon. Please? I love this story.
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aside from the general spelling mistakes this story is still great. I can't wait to see how they're all related. Maybe you should throw together a family tree...
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOOPS! I wonder what'll come of this encounter! Does Dray have creature blood too? Please update soon!!! Pretty pretty please with naked Harry on top?
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think your fic is really good. But it has the potential to be better. You just need to punctuate better. You are missing a LOT of commas. So it makes it awkward to read. Just thought I'd let you know. Maybe investing in a beta reader would be a good idea for you so that they can just polish this gem you have.
Ice
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmmm sooo how will draco react?
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, i cant wait for the next update. i wonder whats going to happen next now that Draco's seen Harry and i wonder why he was sitting at the lake crying for in the first place. update soon.
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh...what's up with Hermione? And why is Draco all depressed? Evil Dumbledore? So curious...hopefully you have time to update soon. Oh yeah...and new Harry sounds lovely...hmmmm.....
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HI! I AM SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED!!! I LOVE THIS STORY AND CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!THANX FOR NOT DROPPING IT:))
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July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! Now THAT is what I am talking about! Harry getting to hear what everyone is thinking? That is awesome! And realizing that Malfoy totally has a crush on him? Priceless! Please tell me that you'll update this story as well? It's just such a pleasure reading your stories--they are clear, concise, and have just enough cuteness to make me fangirl, without giving me a frickin' cavity. I commend you.
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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo need chapter 4!!! What was Dumbledore talking about? What is he hiding?/