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for In Your Eyes

by SexyKittyLovesCum

schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I hear you about the updating!

Wonderful chapter, I love the description of Harry...he sounds beautiful.

Going back in now to see what's up at Hogwarts...
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GAHHHHHHHHH!

You left off at THAT part!!!!?????

How dare you! I will have to let both Lucius and Snape punish you for that!!!

Alllll night long.....

Update soon and you can have them the next night too...
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How about a family tree description when Harry explains it all to Ron, or whoever gets the "hey I'm related to Blank." I just read all the chapters up to this point and was very disappointed when I went to click the next chapter button and there was not one there. Please keep it up. Very interested. I found one typo, can't remember where exactly, but will look and pass it on if you want. It was one of those their instead of there type typos though.
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so Snape's a daddy.....that is so cute....i wonder how he'll take it.....and draco and harry are my fave....i love this plot...please update soon.....oh p.s. i have been in school and could not review sorry but i loved the fact that i had a few chapters to read and i am lovin it...great work
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ha! course i did! of course i also figured out who R.A.B. was 5 minutes after reading book 6. lol. i can't find my copy of book 7 :( it's around here somewhere *goes off to search*
person SilverLion
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY! More winged-Harry! *glomps and plays with the white featers turning Eri into a puddle of goo* Loved this chapter. Wonder when 'Mione's gonna find out. BTW, you misspelled a few words ('scent' for Amortentia, 'Draught' for the 'Draught of Living Death' and another later on).
person Selera
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm to used to twists like this in fanfics. ^^; So they are getting kinda easy to spot.
person SilverLion
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOOOHHHHH! Bite me Harry! BITE MEEEEEE!!!! Or maybe you should just get it over with and bite Draco? He needs a good claiming to chill his attitude out. I could always bite him, amongst other things....>:D
person draydreamer
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ER..HI! FIRST OFF WOW!!!AUSOME FIC AND A WICKED PLOT LINE!!!!LOVE YOUR HARRY-ERI-RY:P AND DER AND DRAY AND WELL EVERYONE XEPT FOR DUMBLEBUM:P
one thing though...could you maybe explain to me the whole relations thing? cause i'm a little lost who is who's causin and uncle and does it mean that SNAPPY-POO IS HARRY'S DAD?????
bazillion thanx in advance
*snuggles you*
person Selera
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh i know I know! *Giggles* Snape is Harry's father not James Potter!