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for Do Unto Others

by AislingSiobhan

schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
an question 1) i'm so there. i can share. or wait my turn. or, you know, keep the others waiting with me entertained. cause seeing severus sexing it up? all the inspiration i'd need.

it's cool that sev is gonna pay without realizing who's collecting the bill lol.

re: electro-convulsive therapy. Shit fucking hurts like a bitch, and your memory gets completely fucked for life, and you develop a chronic case of acute anomia, and you can develop lifelong nerve damage that causes shaking if they accidentally record the wrong vitals in your freaking chart. i speak from experience. i am on social security from the experience because i am unable to function in 'normal' society any longer. i was 20 at the time. i'm 31 now. that said, depending on what you're going for these symptoms can actually help you in your fic because trust me after awhile he'll have a sense-memory of the pain and will do whatever the fuck they want lol. i apologize if my language offends but this here is truth. also, the extreme fatigue and cramping experienced during the process can be grounds for more punishment! i should go read that fic and see what it's about lol.

re: this fic. it rocked and disturbed me deeply, which is why i loved it. thanks for sharing it!!
schedule November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am definitely with you on the doing Snape over James anyday.....He is much better looking.
I loved this oneshot. I wish it had been longer, but it was still good.
xoxo,
kitkat
person Anon
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, but I don't really see what the point of that was. If it was supposed to be sexy, then all I can say is that you are a very sick person. Who gets aroused by the image of a child being raped? I can't see any other point or message of any sort in the story which might justify the use of such images. This just seems to be gratuitous.
person Alaine
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is unlike anything that I have ever read. I did enjoy it (for the lack of a better description). You really captured Harry's strange personality and the last few lines left me shivering in my seat. I say this needs a sequel.
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Duuuuude. This story demands a sequel!!!!
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Actually I first read the story at Forever Fandom and then saw it posted here^^
Couldn't review at FF, so now here you go:

LOOOVED! I like how split Severus is! Although I don't like dark!Harry with it... Personally I like the stories, where he is helpless and submissive(evil me, I know). But Snape was really great character!