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for Fête Galante

by desespoir

schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm in love with this quiet, sexy Slytherin Draco. How genius to have to whisper his name - his first name. How sensous really, no?

And Hermione thought she and Ginny were so clever and here Draco had something up her sleeve. Were I Hermione, I would build in a stipulation that he not show those paintings to anyone. LOL.

Now, about his not trying to seduce here...what a lie. A boldface lie. I also found that he mentioned "no betrothal" very telling. I can understand him saying he doesn't want to seduce her and expects no sexual favors (though I do think he will try to seduce her and does want her in his bed) as both of those are physical. But betrothal is emotional. Of course, the last line is a giveaway.

Will you give us Draco's POV or keep him a mystery?

I also truly enjoy the contrast of Hermione getting so worked up over a kiss, the thought of being an object in his paintings and her seeing herself as not beautiful with him wanting to paint her as this carnal creature. In essence, transform her into a seductive, sensous being, in a way.

Now where will Draco want that kiss? LMAO
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This would be a challenge... This is a beautiful form of love. Even if Hermione doesn't have a clue, like ussually she doesn't I really will be enjoying this process.. So keep them coming.
person Coipje
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooh if Malfoy asked me I would say yes :)
person Anon
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha hes a sneaky one!!!
i love it though
hope you update soon
im really into this story
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! I honestly look forward with great anticipation to the next chapter! "If she looked up, she would
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More more more more more!!!!!! The petulant child on this end wants more! I am absolutely in love with this story. I cannot wait for Draco to scoff at her 'peck on the cheek' kiss and demand a proper one. And then to actually pose nude for him.... mmmmm... fantastic. Keep going!!!!!!!!
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful first chapter! I am intrigued and looking forward to where this story will go!

Excellent writing, and your Draco is mysterious, how i like him! =)

*Lady B*
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Verrry interesting. Can't wait to see how this turns out!
person Liv
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting! I'd love lots of art descriptions as you go further in.
I'm an art lover so this piece automatically pulled me in.

Pretty please continue!
schedule June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Like I said on LJ - wonderful and fabulous.

I'm thrilled you chose a Wizarding Museum as a catalyst. I've been mulling something around in my brain like this for a bit and am so happy someone took up the mantle. Draco seems sexily mature, devious, cunning and sly - a perfect Slytherin. And he's thrown off Hermione completely. I'm sure he has ulterior motives in addition to what he's laid on the table. I know I can't wait to see what up his sleeve!