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March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pure raw and powerful
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March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Redemtion is coming! This have been a great ride!
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February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That is what Hermione is all about.........HONESTY!
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a battle, amazing descriptions! And Albus at the end great touch!
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February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The final battle is around the corner! I have a feeling Severus will not survive for long, Hermione has a long road ahead of her, if that is true - that she is to raise their child fatherless. How sad!
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February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(review of chapter 62) What a poignant death for John! I actually cried. Good job on your characterization of him! For a minor character, you took a minimal amount words to ensure that I bonded with him. Impressive!
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February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(review for chapter 75) Whew! What a cliffhanger! I can see why you needed a break. I must commend you on such a brilliant plot, great character depth, good dialogue and foreshadowing. The most amazing quality of your writing is your commitment to finishing this story for so little feedback. That's dedication! As your dedicated fan, I thank you heartily! As for your grammar, I see no major faults. Thanks again! I hope my feedback brings you encouragement and warmth.
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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(review of chapter 46) Nice pacing and build up of tension!
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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(review of chapter 48) I hope Draco has more presence in this story!
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February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(review of chapter 52) How exciting! I love all this angst!