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July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
u know its stories like this that really makes me hate the fact that the world of harry potter is just fiction boo:( if only jk rowling had written something like this in the series!!!! lol another great chapter I might add which was worth the wait. makes me envy hermione just a lil bit...ok a lot lol the fact that she gets draco...lucky wench. anywhoo can't wait for the next chapter and hope its soon! keep up the good work
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July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just read all ten chapters in one sitting and thoroughly enjoyed it. Normally I don't like cheating, abusive Ron, but this is a toned down version of that, and he is remorseful, so it doesn't bother me much. Draco and Hermione's background really helps to flesh out their interactions. I love how they both think they other is too good for them. And while the UST is killing me (in a good way), it's good to see some restraint considering all they are going through. Well done. :)
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July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
10: Fabulous chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next and what happens the next day after his confession to her. =)
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July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lots and lots of UST and an outside threat. Where's Pansy these days? A crazed Quidditch groupie or is it his 'assistant', trying to stop the divorce and protect Ron's image? Nicely done. Just a note--it is "immanent danger" not 'emmanent' immanent refers to pressing or immediate situations of threat, eminent refers to high social status.
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Just wanted to take a moment and say that i am enjoying this very much. I dont review often, I apologize for that, I get sort of scatterbrained sometimes, especially when Im working on something, BUT I am reading and I like it very much =)
Happy Writing!
S_G
Happy Writing!
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOO good chapter! I would think there was something that was watching them in the flowers but that might be my imagination taking over. Can't wait to see what happens next!!
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm aching for both of them but that kiss!!!!! So much in that kiss. And typical of Ron to send the roses etc now that he knows she's leaving him. It's like he's following the "How to be a total bastard" guidebook.
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooh is it important that she didnt turn on the light in her bedroom, i wonder if the same person that sent the letter has trashed the room??
i like this story a lot, i find myself getting really involved and wishing that it was finsished so i would bloody know whats happening, good work so far i cant wait to know what happens next!!!
i like this story a lot, i find myself getting really involved and wishing that it was finsished so i would bloody know whats happening, good work so far i cant wait to know what happens next!!!
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sexual tension? Poor Hermione she is so naive and blind. She had always love in a sense. Putting a good word for him, helping a little here and there. Well, I am curious about the ultimatum that Draco receive, but we need more of these two.. so keep them coming.