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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great action packed chapter and I love your strong, assertive Draco.
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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness!!!!!! It's sooooo good!!!!!! Loving it! More, more, more, more... please.
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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Chapter six is really setting the stage for the future. I liked it very much, but if you don't mind there was one thing that bothered me: When he was checking her damage, it should have read :...she cowered'; not '...she coward'. coward is a noun, cower is a verb. Just a typo, I'm sure, but I thought you should know. More, please.
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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think he's been attached for a long time.
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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG This is getting better by the chapter.. Please we need some tissue alerts.. Sorry I get to much into it.. Hey Please let Ginny, Harry or Hermione or better yet Molly kick Ron's ass.. that would be soo cool..
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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see a flash back of Draco's trial.This is a grate story.Can't wait for more.
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June 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, that is sheer torture leaving it there! I want another chapter! Who's going to beat up Ron? Anyone?
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June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I love the story so far. I used to do divorce law, back when I practiced (about twenty-five years ago, now), and I am always interested to see how folks set up wizarding law, since JKR was so vague about it. A very creative divorce claim, by the way. Can't wait to see how it ends. I can see problems coming, should this take too long. Unless infidelity by the wife is just as accepted as that of the husband. Keep up the good work. :D
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June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That talk was needed and we all know he is good but a git!!!.. Please let Hermione call Draco and stay with him in Greece...