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I'm very much enjoying this. :) Poor Harry, it's no fun being caught in the middle of a situation like that and I think you captured his emotions perfectly. I think I'd be hard put not to hit Ron myself. Hopefully he will back off for now and sort himself out and leave the way clear for 'other things'. LOL As for Rita, I have no problem wanting to smack her one. I would love to have seen her face when Hermione conjured that jar. Oh and silly Hermione thinking Draco's only helping her to repay a debt. Or is Draco still trying to tell himself that as well? :) More please!!

Great story, but you really need to work on your formatting. It is very difficult to read when you have to keep moving the page over to finish sentances.

I am really enjoying it. I like how it is not progressing too fast. Please update soon.

This was really good and funny.. Please let Harry beat the shit out of Ron with pleasure anytime this was a fun one, especially with Rita in the middle.. Keep them coming!!!

Very lovely seventh chapter. Some typos which distracted a bit, but you've caught the life of a trial attorney fairly well. I would say that most meetings would have been notated, so that, should she need to, she could back up what was said during them. Particularly meetings with colleagues. Those with clients she'd also notate or commit to a written memorandum of what transpired. One never knows when memories change, and need to be refreshed. :D

I'm finding some of the things in this story rather eerily familiar. (No Draco waiting for me at the end of it though - LOL) That confrontation with Ron on the steps - I got chills. Typical "I don't want you but I don't want anyone else to have you nor will I let you make of fool of me either" moment. She definitely has to get out and move on with her life and I understand how hard it was for Hermione to make that final decision and leave and how hard it would have been to turn up at Ginny's who was then torn between her love for Hermione and for her brother. I'm pissed off at them for knowing about Ron's affairs and not telling her though or at least giving her a huge hint but I suppose some things you know but you aren't ready to admit too. Love that Draco feels honour bound to do right by Hermione and repay her for her earlier kindness (of course, that's not his only motivation). :)

sad :( I know this is a Hermione and Draco story and I've never liked Ron and Hermione as a couple but all of a sudden i feel very sad for their loss of relationship. awe, peas. This was a very good chapter. More please! Draco comes to the rescue perhaps?

Hermione/Draco ain't my favourite pairing (prefering Hermione/Lucius), but I have read some good ones, and this story is really, really good. I love the plot, I adore Ron-bashing, and you have a Draco that is totally likable, true hero-material, and I love it:-))

Thank you for updating so quickly! I am glad she wasn't able to cover up what happened. Draco never did find out about the head bump, though. I can't wait for Harry and Ginny to find out. You are going down, Ron Weasley! I love how much Hermione means to Draco from what she did. I really hope Rowling does do her book telling us about everything we want to know, but didn't find out in the books so we can see just how amazing Hermione was after graduation.

Loved the two chapters you updated! I look forward to seeing if wizarding Britain has the equivalent of a Temporary Restraining Order. :D