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July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, dear, dear. I hope Ginny isn't too pissed off. Hermione needs her friends right now. I wonder, if what the papers are saying is really going to happen...soon? I'll wait and see. Look forward to the next chapter!
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July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man! I didn't want it to end!! Can't wait for the next one! Great job!! =]
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July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Best chatper yet! I loved all the dialogue. Moved along smoothly and quickly. And I love how Draco's always cutting her off with the "Draco."'s haahhaah. that would be infuriating. And i found your writting overtly good in this chapter. I liked that plugging her ears bit. Please update quickly! Can't wait.
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July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I didn't notice any scrolling problem at all. Loved the most recent chapter. :D
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July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this story. Ron is despicable for cheating on Hermione. I honestly burst out laughing when I heard that she can get divorced for not doing his "husbandly duties". I hope everything goes smoothly (though I doubt that will happen). I'm glad Hermione has someplace private to stay. Greece is fabulous and I could really imagine being on the island. Though I can understand her relunctance to just stay at his place without paying for anything or even to repay the debt he owed her. I /was/ surprised that Hermione Apparated from the island dressed like that, even to Harry and Ginny's place. Fabulously written and I hope you'll update again soon! =)
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July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely updates my dear! Good job!
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July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the story very much. However, can you please stop putting long lines of ============= after your story?
It causes the story th have a scroll bar at the bottom of the screen and you have to keep moving it back and forth to read a sentence.
It causes the story th have a scroll bar at the bottom of the screen and you have to keep moving it back and forth to read a sentence.
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I still can't wait for Harry to see Hermione's bruises. I hope Katie lets Fred and George know the state she is in. If Fred's alive. Of course Ron puts bruises on his own face. The wanker! Now people will think Hermione did it. Draco is taking such good care of Hermione. What a sweetheart!
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
best lines:
“Alright. Let’s do it. Let’s divorce my husband for not having sex with me.”
They looked at each other and laughed.
. His hands itched to find their way around Weasley’s gangly little neck. As many times as she’d been close to tears during the paperwork was how many times he wanted to use his own Unforgivable Curse on the cur.
“Alright. Let’s do it. Let’s divorce my husband for not having sex with me.”
They looked at each other and laughed.
. His hands itched to find their way around Weasley’s gangly little neck. As many times as she’d been close to tears during the paperwork was how many times he wanted to use his own Unforgivable Curse on the cur.
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
best lines:
She was done forgiving and forgetting. She was going to take her life in her own hands. She deserved better.
“What is ‘master’s rule’?”
“Whatever doesn’t get eaten is sent to the orphanage in town.”
Even though she would use up all her savings in his fees, it was worth it to be rid of that bastard who had pledged to love, honor and cherish her for the rest of his life. What a crock. The second reason was because of the words he had uttered so long ago:
“I owe you, Granger. Anything, anytime,” he had croaked. “I owe you my life. If there’s anything-,”
She would miss Molly and Arthur and the big dinners and the holidays. It was a shock to realize she would miss his family more than him.
“I’m sorry, I’m not trying to be rude. I just can’t get an appetite.”
“Understandable. Divorce is always hard, but it’s no reason to starve yourself,” he leaned over her and unbelievably, began to fill her plate.
“You swallowed before you spoke, ok? That’s why I’m crying, that’s why I’m carrying on like a babbling fool because my husband never had the decency to do something like that!”
She was done forgiving and forgetting. She was going to take her life in her own hands. She deserved better.
“What is ‘master’s rule’?”
“Whatever doesn’t get eaten is sent to the orphanage in town.”
Even though she would use up all her savings in his fees, it was worth it to be rid of that bastard who had pledged to love, honor and cherish her for the rest of his life. What a crock. The second reason was because of the words he had uttered so long ago:
“I owe you, Granger. Anything, anytime,” he had croaked. “I owe you my life. If there’s anything-,”
She would miss Molly and Arthur and the big dinners and the holidays. It was a shock to realize she would miss his family more than him.
“I’m sorry, I’m not trying to be rude. I just can’t get an appetite.”
“Understandable. Divorce is always hard, but it’s no reason to starve yourself,” he leaned over her and unbelievably, began to fill her plate.
“You swallowed before you spoke, ok? That’s why I’m crying, that’s why I’m carrying on like a babbling fool because my husband never had the decency to do something like that!”