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for Second Time Around

by RynStar15

schedule July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter, but I have to say unfulfilled love is very sad. Will Draco and Hermione be able to... well... fulfill it soon (or ever, for that matter)?
person mlui
schedule July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
9: Lovely chapter! In one way, I like how Hermione has morals with her marriage, but on the other hand, it's really annoying! Looking forward to the next update! =)
person kazfeist
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, that throws a very interesting twist into the plot! Can't wait to see who's the letter-writer! :D
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh. That can't mean anything good. Fantastic update, I can't wait for more!
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How did the note get there? I thought that no one knew the place existed?
was it from ron? or some other nutter who has his eye on Hermione?
update soon!!
xxx
person Robs
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear Draco! Great chapter. I hope her divorce goes through easily. It is fairly clear that she wants him as much as he wants her. Look forward to the next chapter!
person katiekrm
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I cannot begin to tell you how much I am LOVING this fic. I was cracking up at the devil cat part. I can just see our heroic cat chasing bad Draco across Hogwarts. That is so funny. And that was the hottest non kiss scene I think I have ever read.
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Lord, they are thinking the same thing, that they do not deserved each other. And this letter. Had to be someone that knoows that he got this property. But whom? TATA!!!! Mystery on the making. Curious, yeah!!!! This cliffie was very intense and I wonder........ Lucius? Ok, the answers lies in your hands my dear writter... Keep them coming.
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful...so sensuous, full of passion, fear, desire, love and need. Sigh, Hermione, you're getting divorced - share part of yourself with him (no I don't mean sleeping). Your characters are always so conflicted in such delicious ways.

What was that last missive? Oh my! Could it be Ron? Or another? OH MY!
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a awesome story, and I love the way you portray Draco. The way you have built up the chemistry between him and Hermione has me dying for that moment when it all comes together. Can't wait to read more.