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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it but you should really consider continuing it.
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June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cute story! If only life was really like that, hahaha.
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June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was an a very lovely story I love these plotlines and i love this draco too.
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a very nice and sweet story. I liked the way it is told and the feelings the words you've chosen convey. Very good work!
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was so sweet!!
How about a sequel? Hermione Pregnant with their second child??
please? haha
great work
xxx
How about a sequel? Hermione Pregnant with their second child??
please? haha
great work
xxx
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
best lines:
Draco roared incoherently, and both his parents cringed at his rage.
Breathing deeply, Draco reined in his anger. They didn’t matter. His voice quieted to a growl, and he said, “I am getting her back and we are going to be a family. And you will not be part of it!”
“But I... I sent memories. They sent money, said it was from you... I put it all away for him, never even touched it.”
They sat together, each looking at the other, unable to believe how their lives had been orchestrated.
“So you... you didn’t say you didn’t want him?” she clarified, her voice shaking slightly.
“I did not even know he existed until a few hours ago. I don’t know him, but I want him. Hermione, I’m so sorry for what my parents have done, but I will make it up to him, to both of you. I—I looked for you, you know."
He looked her in the eye for a long moment, before whispering, “I tried to get out to see you but the door wouldn’t open, no matter what I said or did. It’s a very bad door, Mother. I think we should fire it and hire a new one.”
“I’d go anywhere with you.”
He was of two minds about it, but for the moment, he was beyond furious with them and told Hermione to burn any letters they sent to her about him.
...he also wasn’t sure if he could handle seeing her, swollen with his child, knowing he was living in luxury, ignorant, while she was alone.
“It’s just you and me, Baby. We’re in this together, now. We only have one another, so we have to try our hardest to make due, okay? Please?” Her voice broke and tears trailed down her cheeks. She looked so very alone.
"But I do want you. I want you as a friend, as a lover, as my son’s mother, and everything else you are. I want it all, and I’m willing to make it a fair trade, too.”
Settling between her thighs again was like coming home.
“I think I could get used to you very quickly, Draco Malfoy,” she whispered.
Draco roared incoherently, and both his parents cringed at his rage.
Breathing deeply, Draco reined in his anger. They didn’t matter. His voice quieted to a growl, and he said, “I am getting her back and we are going to be a family. And you will not be part of it!”
“But I... I sent memories. They sent money, said it was from you... I put it all away for him, never even touched it.”
They sat together, each looking at the other, unable to believe how their lives had been orchestrated.
“So you... you didn’t say you didn’t want him?” she clarified, her voice shaking slightly.
“I did not even know he existed until a few hours ago. I don’t know him, but I want him. Hermione, I’m so sorry for what my parents have done, but I will make it up to him, to both of you. I—I looked for you, you know."
He looked her in the eye for a long moment, before whispering, “I tried to get out to see you but the door wouldn’t open, no matter what I said or did. It’s a very bad door, Mother. I think we should fire it and hire a new one.”
“I’d go anywhere with you.”
He was of two minds about it, but for the moment, he was beyond furious with them and told Hermione to burn any letters they sent to her about him.
...he also wasn’t sure if he could handle seeing her, swollen with his child, knowing he was living in luxury, ignorant, while she was alone.
“It’s just you and me, Baby. We’re in this together, now. We only have one another, so we have to try our hardest to make due, okay? Please?” Her voice broke and tears trailed down her cheeks. She looked so very alone.
"But I do want you. I want you as a friend, as a lover, as my son’s mother, and everything else you are. I want it all, and I’m willing to make it a fair trade, too.”
Settling between her thighs again was like coming home.
“I think I could get used to you very quickly, Draco Malfoy,” she whispered.
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aaah how romantic :)
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow and there is another one of your one shots that could be a great story.... loved it and loved orion!!!!
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Utter brilliance in a fic! That was a fantastic story line, and a brilliant ending. Fabulous!
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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I read this in between essays I have to write for my finals and I have to say it's one of the best breaks I've ever had. This was very well written and heart warming. Orion is just the cutest little thing, way too smart for his own good. I almost hope you'll have a sequal with their other children :)
Well done!
Well done!