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by margaritama

person Anon
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
EXCUSE MY LANGUAGE - BUT THIS IS "FUCKING" HOT. ONE OF THE BEST DRAMIONE ONE-SHOTS I'VE READ THIS YEAR! GREAT JOB. GOOD THING I HAVE YOU ON MY FAVORITE LIST SINCE YOU FINISHED WRITING YOUR SHOE STORY. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE OF YOU STORIES AND ONESHOTS. GREAT JOB! LOVED THIS ONE. YOU AND T-STEVESON ARE THE BEST! I WILL NEVER GET TIRED OF READING YOUR CREATIVE WRITING. SERIOUSLY. YOU GUYS HAVE INSPIRED ME TO FINISH ALL MY UNDONE WORK THAT I HAVE PUT ASIDED FOR LAZINESS. THANK YOU! I LOVED THE EPILOGUE. GREAT JOB! I WOULD HAVE RATHER READ SOMETHING LIKE THIS ON THE HARRY POTTER EPILOGUE THAN THAT RUBISH I READ ABOUT RON/HERMIONE AND ASTORIA AND DRACO.

GREAT JOB!

LS
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story!!! i loved every min of it. you write very beautifully. 10/10
person kazfeist
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! And you used my two fave names for Malfoy offspring: Orion and Cassiopoeia. :D
person smmz79
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved this little plot bunny... very hot sex in the library... i liked that they developed a friendhip over the monthes and that they had not cared what others thought... i like that you did not throw in what harry and ron thought.... i really like that bc honestly it is not there decision.. thats what i loved about your her shoes story they were in the background but not making her decisions.... loved her muggle saying and i thought it was cute that draco used one at the end...
person Anon
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure you know by now that I HAVE to read everything you write and once again you did not disappoint nor would I expect you too. That was fabulously delicious, hot and sexy and very, very moreish. What a pity it was a one shot but WHAT a one shot. Loved it!
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw!! that was brilliant!!
Casey
xoxo
person Doxey Brunstone
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! SO SEXXXY!!! Love it!!!
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say, I was intrigued about this story since you told me about it last night. Omgosh! It was amazing. You have to love magic, a library, a frustrated Draco, and a clueless Hermione. *winks* You have won me over once again.
person andarte
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Really sweet. :)
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOT!

Adored it. :)
I really liked the mixed up Draco. It was a one-shot so obviously things happen faster between parties, but I didn't feel like this was rushed. They all went through the conflicting emotions, and everything that comes with having feelings for someone your not supposed to. I really liked that. I was never a fan of rushing this pairing. It wouldn't make sense.
You're very talented with writing emotions. I envy that!

Excellent :)
xoxo
dM