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June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for chapter 3! Did anyone know about Ron and Draco?
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June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The premise is good, but it reads more like a summary than an actual story.. Harmless advice: slow down a little and write scenes instead of events, and add some dialogue. :) Good job.
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June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmm.... interesting.
I'm glad you wrote both POVs of Harry and Draco so that we can understand their backgrounds. And man, did that part about Ron being Draco's lover surprise me! I never saw that coming. How will Harry react to that?
Well, I'm glad that they're both there at the bar now. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please. Looking forward to it!! : )
I'm glad you wrote both POVs of Harry and Draco so that we can understand their backgrounds. And man, did that part about Ron being Draco's lover surprise me! I never saw that coming. How will Harry react to that?
Well, I'm glad that they're both there at the bar now. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please. Looking forward to it!! : )